Thursday, October 27, 2011

Voids


Inoculation
Ambulatory spoons deride
Compositionality of lies

Inosculation
Evangelist, praising corroborative allegory
Turning shade, turncoat, turn-key

An inosilicate consumed by greed
That fate has paired with a chain in need

Surveyor flips through stenciled frame
Pages laced with misinformation,
Birthed by jealous inoscopy

Inquilinity
Suckling far past comfort,
The carbon dissolves.

Inopinate
Those without purpose are often left behind
Those without forgiveness linger on
Those forgotten exist forever
Voids are endless



5 comments:

  1. Some people are just like voids, they are so poor pitiful me that they suck others down with them no matter where they go and aren't happy until they do so. Then of course there is the flip side where their ego needs people to flock to them so they feel great about themselves, went off there, but that's the void brought about in my mind..haha

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  2. Oh, wow. If I start quoting the cool stuff, I'll never stop. This just rocks!

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  3. Inopinate
    Those without purpose are often left behind
    Those without forgiveness linger on
    Those forgotten exist forever
    Voids are endless

    damn, that last stanza smacks dude...some fine word play through out as well...but that is my fav part by far...

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  4. I agree with Mama Zen but I do want to talk about the language. Heavens, I actually felt that little sensuous lilting of the eyelids (almost a tiny fainting fit) over inquilinity. Inosculation is close to one of my favorite words osculant. Thank you very much for checking out my sister sites, especially Chromatoids and leaving a comment!

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  5. Pat, yep voids are like people too- kind of a bit of the inspiration here- flappy probably played in there someplace subconsciously as well-lol Thanks

    Mama-
    Thanks, glad you enjoyed the piece.

    Brian-

    Thanks, I like that stanza a lot too

    Anna-

    Thanks, yeah I can't take too much credit for this piece, have to give the thesaurus a shout out- lol I was looking something up and I already had inoculation down in the first stanza, when I came across inquilinity, which I just loved the sound of it- I think I've come to the point of liking all words with Q's in them-just sayin- I've always like osculation- haha- but the way the word sounds too- and I thought it fitting to include the negation, was going to go in-osculation to add another layer but thought against it. Anyhow, thanks again- really glad you liked it

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