A flagrant volition—a
violation, an action and a scowl—determined aggravation from the tongue of
pawn—intrigued by the rapturous ideology presented in the late—by an
allegorical phantasm of chance, an echoic beauty—one whom not even time could
prevent the inviting allegation to conceive it’s concocted arrhythmia to the
weather-worn hopes of one as he—
Held in awe, by a desperate princess, bearing
fruitful presents and an unholy proclamation of some love-stricken scheme that
preyed endearingly, to every impossible shard of dream ever awoken from—
Encased was a promise,
a scented sentence if detected, for this vow, was considerable in all it stood
for to the two at hand, yet dynamically catastrophic by those in
opposition. This love, between two such
as these, was in fact, in direct disobedience of the caste each were forced to
lead their lives upon.
Sufferance would
indeed be remarked. Damnation would, in all effect, be set in spades, even as
twin bounties corrugate between the sky and all the Heavens it protects, and
the reams of suet still freshly stifled, as the heart’s contents remained—where
still set the bone, strangling upon the saltiest of teardrops ever wrung.
Vitality was denied
through end of breath. Parturient strands unabashed by the chaotic consequence
at bay—unintended for, yet persisting nonetheless, were its strides—a
collateral
Striation, bound by sinew’s
string, looping through the bitter entanglements of the amnesia stricken torso
to which the factions fortuitously release, divide—segregating lower lip,
pierced by steel and ember and the upper manifestations—the mutations estranged
by first sin’s blaspheming kiss.
Protracted
involvement. Sacrilege upon the altar of the
Withered. Flesh of
songbird, broken wing—yet clung it had, dearly, paying ultimate price to
perform it’s duty, clinging tightly with pride, onto the message placed within
its’ talon’s
Side.
really nice rhythm in this man...how vivid the imagery as well...particularly that next to last stanza for me....
ReplyDeleteTons of great imagery at play, as most days at your bay, trying to withstand death with every breath and cling to life, is sure something at one point or another to cause many strife. Some things can and can't be done, as such when it's the end of your run it's the end of your run.
ReplyDeleteAs Pat and Brian said...so much imagery here. I am fascinated with the idea of the princess with presents & damnation set in spades.
ReplyDeletealso that the songbird even in the end clung to its song...
ReplyDeleteA lot to digest here Fred, but I have the impression of two people from different caste system, paying the ultimate price for their love and sins ~
ReplyDeleteHappy OLN ~
hey fred
ReplyDeletethis deserves at least a couple more listens and read thrus: much to take in and breakdown to absorb fully but on a first impression i have to say it offers vivid pictures and excites with its atmosphere and strong sense of identity . . . its been a while since i have watched a good reading and it really expanded or nailed the piece having you relay it direct and in style . . . cheers fred, all the best
like others mentioned already...the images stand out here but for me also the intensity of tone
ReplyDeletea difficult journey
ReplyDeletewritten with a reaching depth that commands rereads and you find something every time love it , Chris http://velvetmedia.wordpress.com/
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