Thursday, October 13, 2011

The Plot


Alliterate beings bound about
Illiterate minds cast shade in doubt
Literary figures stand strong
In this day and those beyond

Flash. 
Flow of the cold winter air. Circulating
In weathered strips of fermentation, the tears oft get lost in the creases-
Freely the fear freckles form
Uncanny.  A familiarity still-
As you’re left staring up the hill
Stone paths pronounced the trail
To the chapel house:
Where blackened shoes make their mark
Where wandering alibis come for their own
Where the darkness forms a cloud of clothes
Black and brown suits and slacks
Filtered grey veiled masks

In the interlude between patience and angst

“They keep the grounds very nicely, even with the snow and being so close to the road and all,”
“Yep, there’s never a sign of debris, nowhere”

Words. 
That’s all that remains. 
Words and memories of words and the way we attempt recreating images from those words. 
Some are distilled to paint the lines. 
Some distort the lanes of time. 
Others…
Are just words,
In a void,
Colorless and disturbed

Sometimes I wonder as you wait:
Do you feel lonesome?
Does the emptiness within consume you?
If it does I am dearly sorry
But rest assured-
It won’t be that way for ever-
And then…you’ll have me for eternity

4 comments:

  1. My mind went all over the place with this one too, guess it's just one of those days..haha. Could work for thos above the gorund suffering lost and those below the ground waiting to be reunitited one day, great piece, really does make one think. Hopefully it's not just bones that one gets for eternity when they go..haha

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  2. wow - this is awesome imagery in this fred...the interlude between patience and angst..such love how you spell loneliness with your verse

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  3. really dig this centre-aligned section -

    Where blackened shoes make their mark
    Where wandering alibis come for their own
    Where the darkness forms a cloud of clothes
    Black and brown suits and slacks
    Filtered grey veiled masks

    left field is good field, my man!

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  4. Pat, thanks, well it may be my fault for your mind being everywhere-after the Twisted T's and the worm- perhaps too far the wheel I've spun-lol Good interpretation, I like the way that sounds

    Claudia- thanks really glad you enjoy the piece, I've always said if there's one thing I can do well it's painting a dark cloud darker. lol Thanks I appreciate the feedback

    Luke, yeah I do tow the line between left field and the bleacher seats- lol Glad you enjoyed the piece. Appreciate the feedback

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