Yet these “savages”
are neither restless nor retired,
are neither restless nor retired,
On an island nation much different than our own
a palace stands still
Despite walls of crumbling stone,
A "king" rules with scepter high
upon a throne salvaged from
citizens, denizens and constituencies
Being no match for the monkeys,
that dangle and swing
from those decapitated trees of dream
a prince cannot conspire
like the ne’er-do-well
who's ever quick to swallow,
like the ne’er-do-well
who's ever quick to swallow,
w
o
r
d
s un
spoken
Yet they each have their own
semblance of faith,
that,
when deconstructed
illustrates potential
possibilities
as to how
o
r
d
s un
spoken
Yet they each have their own
semblance of faith,
that,
when deconstructed
illustrates potential
possibilities
as to how
Some things still
remain stronger
than the pervasive
howls and oppressively
toned splintering
screams
remain stronger
than the pervasive
howls and oppressively
toned splintering
screams
of slivers-
etched and tuned,
the unreachable palaces
housing those
delinquencies within
the unreachable palaces
housing those
delinquencies within
Some call it shrapnel
others karma
others karma
I say relief,
for the print could be
much smaller and
the level could've risen higher
for the print could be
much smaller and
the level could've risen higher
The king breathes shallow
as ink dries to skin
this tumbled tomb
paints parables
of irony
as ink dries to skin
this tumbled tomb
paints parables
of irony
For it was the medic
who's back turned wayside
who's back turned wayside
a distance from events
and shame-less-
and shame-less-
He stands, as a leader should,
preaching to minions
who just happened to be
a people much stronger
than the illness he freed
This is a poem I originally posted last March. I've reissued it, with a few changes and have linked to the Fortresses, Castles, Palaces and Royal Houses prompt for Poetry Picnic Week 33
as well as for Magpie Tales 115
who just happened to be
a people much stronger
than the illness he freed
This is a poem I originally posted last March. I've reissued it, with a few changes and have linked to the Fortresses, Castles, Palaces and Royal Houses prompt for Poetry Picnic Week 33
as well as for Magpie Tales 115
I wonder if once he's read the book though and when he's bored and maybe lonely, if the king would be happy in his isolation.
ReplyDeleteGreat tale Fred.
"Karma shrapnel" - a fine concept. Thanks for a very good response to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThough not easy , it seems the kingdom has asumed a certain orderliness , great trip, mate.
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I say relief,
for the print could be
much smaller and
the level could've risen higher
could have been worse for sure...i like that is was the medic that was the real leader, a healer...and a people stronger than the illness freed..some really cool story telling fred...
The king and his kingly makes. He would have to replenish his reading materials to stay on. It'll just happen in a karma? Great read Fred!
ReplyDeleteHank
A well told tale ..thank you for sharing x
ReplyDeleteI really like "some call it shrapnel others karma"...nice write...
ReplyDeletethis is great
ReplyDeleteyou have so many terms that make me think of taking a crap like the crumbling walls
and you have terms like unreachable places and the dangle and swing..."precious"
renal test
Enjoyed reading this and to tell the truth sometimes I feel like queen of all I survey, until my family comes home and I realize that to them I'm mother, healer, bank and friend. Perhaps not a queen, but part of a wonderful kingdom. Well written, be blessed.
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