Sunday, July 24, 2011

Regurgitated Hypotheticals


Idle.
Tween corral and plain
Elevate.
Tween razor and blade
Transistor
Verbose belligerency

Attract.
Atop canal and sconce
Altering.
Coda
Valiant tendency

Glance.
Beyond sledgehammer and swan
Neuter
Regurgitate hypotheses




3 comments:

  1. Neuter the new and regurgitate the same old crap, so true. Seems that is all we see now a days.

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  2. sledgehammer and swan, interesting pairing...this one is rather surreal...

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  3. Pat, Brian thanks again for the visit, appreciated as usual, This piece I have to be honest is mainly babble/stream, so I totally get the surreal description Brian, makes tons of sense to me. It went on and on for about 3 pages but trust me, it got really whacked out after this point. I liked the sledgehammer and swan contrast imagery so I actually kept that stanza in, changed a tween a coral rampage into regurgitated hypothesis to represent the dismissed two and a half pages, seeing most of what was written in there were hypotheticals of sorts. Pat you snagged the impression I got from the babbled sheets myself, must have been hearing a bunch of cover songs done horribly or perhaps it was watching previews for say fright night, which never should be redone in my opinion, whatever the subconscious rationale I saw a similar pattern in this write as you do. Thanks again guys, always a pleasure

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