The Other Side of Poetry
Neuter the new and regurgitate the same old crap, so true. Seems that is all we see now a days.
sledgehammer and swan, interesting pairing...this one is rather surreal...
Pat, Brian thanks again for the visit, appreciated as usual, This piece I have to be honest is mainly babble/stream, so I totally get the surreal description Brian, makes tons of sense to me. It went on and on for about 3 pages but trust me, it got really whacked out after this point. I liked the sledgehammer and swan contrast imagery so I actually kept that stanza in, changed a tween a coral rampage into regurgitated hypothesis to represent the dismissed two and a half pages, seeing most of what was written in there were hypotheticals of sorts. Pat you snagged the impression I got from the babbled sheets myself, must have been hearing a bunch of cover songs done horribly or perhaps it was watching previews for say fright night, which never should be redone in my opinion, whatever the subconscious rationale I saw a similar pattern in this write as you do. Thanks again guys, always a pleasure