Shades of pink
Hues of blue
Counting
The chameleon heart
Blessings kept
Sultry and clean
Alive in mostly
Everything
Floating upon lifting air
Above the woods clothed in vine
Watching flesh turn & pare
While desires of the fruits below, ache & pine a smothered slow
Blessings wept
Mind and spleen
Alive in mostly
My every thing
Shades of red
Hues of white
Comprise the makeup
Of a fractured light
Blessings
Periwinkle and musk
Alive in mostly
Any thing
I love this! "chameleon heart" the rhyming, the style just the whole thing absolutely fabulous!
ReplyDeleteThis is very interesting. It flows so well and the organization complements the words therein. Good job, I enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteMindlovemisery, thanks for reading, really glad you enjoyed this poem. It was a lot of fun coming up with
ReplyDeleteRandy, thanks for the visit. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Really happy you noticed the specificity in shape and structure, kind of a big deal for me with this particular piece. Thanks
ReplyDeleteSo true, blessings can be found in most anything, if you take the time to look. As it can always be worse.
ReplyDeleteha this is colorful, airy and dances across the page..
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful intriguing poem. Love the way you set it out - it really added to the feel of the words.
ReplyDeletebeautiful write
ReplyDeletedesires of the fruit below..ha...nice...great flow fres...and chameleon heart is a nice touch as well...great piece and great to see you at dverse
ReplyDeletecute, lovely words.
ReplyDeletelove your positive attitude.
Thanks to everyone who left comments for this piece. I really glad you all enjoyed it. Glad I got to share it with all of you. Thanks again
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