Friday, July 1, 2011

Dark Tranquility


Dark Tranquility
Instilled unto virgin eyes
Forward vision blurred

Slander masquerade
Disguises take many shapes
Hobbled by design

Little wish
Atop silver mounds
Shining bright

Bandoliers
Sneaking dreams breaking
Promises
In fluctuation
As stars dim appeal

Dark tranquility
Exported forward from one
Split decision tree

Creeping across spring
Awaiting discourse of love
Dominions of sway
Whisking aftermaths into
Shuddering tonality

Silencing
Scenario streams
Blank pages

Portuguese
Man of
War



4 comments:

  1. Portaguese man of war was a nice touch, as it can be a danger in the waters below. Just as one stupid comment can cause somes dreams to break. Creating blank pages, that could have been filled. All from the BS one weaves.

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  2. Pat, very true. Thanks for the visit. Always appreciate your feedback. Thanks:)

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  3. Man, I like how you put your words together in such unusual ways... and I agree the last line was a nice touch. :-)

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  4. Classic NYer good to see you again. From one Ny'er to another, it's a pleasure to share poetry with you. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Thanks for the feedback I appreciate your words:)

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