Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Knowledge and Logic Walk Into a Bar...


Pyrotechnics
Flames profound

Instrumental
Sounds surround

Linguistic
Words abound

Paradoxical
Worlds allowed

Scientific
Strands alone

Knowledge
The breadth of form

Technical
Codes are found

Rotational
Spits turn round

Vertical
Ups and downs

Logic
And where it takes me

Radical
Shields erect

Rationale
Teasing tricks

Symphonic
Harmonies in bliss

Seasonal
Spirits align

Knowledge
Abreast in form

7 comments:

  1. This one came off rather interesting to me. I read it straight through and then read just the top and then just the bottom lines, makes for quite the interesting combination. I guess that's what it's all about sounds and the vision, really played to my psychicness..haha

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  2. ha. nice form in this fred, flows tight...and while similar i find the two very different...think i would put my money on knowledge

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  3. I love a lover of words. And science. Both poetry.

    And this was kinda sensuously sassy -- or is that just my naughty mind reading between the lines? :)

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  4. simple and effective - a rolling outflow - that gets the mind working - works well with the blog - cool word play

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  5. Pat, interesting little trick, worked I like. Brain, thanks, i'm not sure which one I'd put my money on, I'm a big fan of logic and logical thought, but sometimes knowledge and experience have a whole different version to tell, Jannie- Perhaps a little bit both:)

    Arron, thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it, glad you enjoyed it.

    Thanks everyone, really appreciate the feedback:)

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  6. Short Poems, thanks for the visit, really glad you liked the poem

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