Pyrotechnics
Flames profound
Instrumental
Sounds surround
Linguistic
Words abound
Paradoxical
Worlds allowed
Scientific
Strands alone
Knowledge
The breadth of form
Technical
Codes are found
Rotational
Spits turn round
Vertical
Ups and downs
Logic
And where it takes me
Radical
Shields erect
Rationale
Teasing tricks
Symphonic
Harmonies in bliss
Seasonal
Spirits align
Knowledge
Abreast in form
This one came off rather interesting to me. I read it straight through and then read just the top and then just the bottom lines, makes for quite the interesting combination. I guess that's what it's all about sounds and the vision, really played to my psychicness..haha
ReplyDeleteha. nice form in this fred, flows tight...and while similar i find the two very different...think i would put my money on knowledge
ReplyDeleteI love a lover of words. And science. Both poetry.
ReplyDeleteAnd this was kinda sensuously sassy -- or is that just my naughty mind reading between the lines? :)
simple and effective - a rolling outflow - that gets the mind working - works well with the blog - cool word play
ReplyDeletePat, interesting little trick, worked I like. Brain, thanks, i'm not sure which one I'd put my money on, I'm a big fan of logic and logical thought, but sometimes knowledge and experience have a whole different version to tell, Jannie- Perhaps a little bit both:)
ReplyDeleteArron, thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it, glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks everyone, really appreciate the feedback:)
Wisely done! Great imagery too!
ReplyDeleteShort Poems, thanks for the visit, really glad you liked the poem
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