Beneath scarf and tie,
Bristling brush,
I’m sensing your push,
Whispering unto nape,
Shiver and shake
I sense the smell you make,
Caressing sweetly,
Over bruises deep,
I sense the moisture seep,
Massages, kneading,
Tissues torn and dry,
I sense your lies,
I feel the signals,
Issuing their warning,
I sense the sounds,
The restlessness of morning,
I read the motion,
Of waves collapsing,
I hear the warmth,
Beneath your eyes
All lies, all deceptions,
Carefully crafted superficiality,
Entwined with intentions, tailor made décor,
Beneath the softness, lays a jagged floor
Impending,
Through the silence, in the paint,
The forest comes alive, the foliage wakes,
Moving are its branches; broken is the trail,
No time for sorrow; no chance to fail,
Impending doom will swallow,
As the night grows hollow,
Dreams laced with paper cuts
Nightmares infused with trust
I like this very much. Your closing couplet is reallly powerful.
ReplyDeleteMary, thanks for visiting, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Funny thing is I almost didn't include the last couplet. Was on the verge of editing it out a few times, but the more and more I read it I feel it really works. So glad I kept it in there now. Thanks again:)
ReplyDeleteOh wow Fred this just blew me away. I absolutely love it! So much depth and every line is a work of art, a painting
ReplyDeletemindlovemisery, really pleased you like it, anytime I get compliments from those I enjoy reading is an added ego boost:) Thanks again and really glad you enjoyed this piece and am flattered :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing esp the last parts. You have a really vivid and expressive imagery! :)
ReplyDeletefabulous write.
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Psychebubbles, Always good to see a new face around, welcome, glad you enjoyed the piece and glad you could respond. Thanks for the praise, it means a lot:)
ReplyDeletejingle, thanks again for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed the piece. :)
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