Analogic
Pantheon of pristine
Unguarded, engulfed
Inquisitors swarm
Revolt
Frozen on the image
Repelling toward
Silence and sequester
Melodramatically fester
Painful corroboration
Unshielded eyes
Crown
Mystic
Exacerbations of self
Vice grip spreading
Wounds steeped
Angst
Embryonic parallels
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ReplyDeletenice fred...i like the flow through the images..i need to think on it a bit more and come back...
ReplyDeleteVery complex, deep and thought provoking imagery. Sometimes life is filled with growing pains.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting me and the comment Fred.
beautiful expression on complexity of life.
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Reminding you to join jingle poetry potluck week 41 tonight.
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Cheers.
Always, your poetry is sunshine to us!
Bless your weekend.
xoxox
Miguel, Gracias por visitarnos y gracias por seguir mi blog. Agradezco los comentarios y estoy muy contento que les guste mi poesía. Esperamos verlos de nuevo, gracias de nuevo:)
ReplyDeleteBrian, It's really great having a poet of your quality stopping in on a regular basis. Really appreciate it. Really glad you enjoy the work Thanks again:)
ReplyDeleteDaydreamer, oh you're welcome, your site is really good. I enjoy your work very much. Glad you enjoyed this piece. And yeah, life is filled with growing pains. I like that take, wow..complete expansion of my thought process. I wanted to parallel the angst and sometimes downright terrifying notion where we rebel against ourselves, our surroundings, only to evolve and compare it with what a child goes through in its early development. But your interpretation works well too, I like it a lot. And this is exactly why I love me some poetry. It's all about the reader, one interpretation can get you thinking about a piece, even your own in a different context. And in poetry, sure sometimes you have a point you want to make, but when you write in a somewhat cryptic or convoluted style like I do a lot, it's so cool hearing others interpretations- cuz those are the times that get me thinking. Thanks:)
ReplyDeletePoetry Potluck, thanks for stopping in, really glad you enjoy this piece and my contributions to yours. I really appreciate all the sites that let us link and share our work to a much more concentrated and specialized viewership. Working on a few this evening, if I don't get them on tonight, sure thing for the morning. Hope you get some extra traffic from here, added you to my poetry list on bottom of each page and put a button up, anyhow thanks again:)
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