Polluted
tadpole
Cracked
and distilled
Jupiter’s
child upon
Rings
of clay
Cantankerous curmudgeonly
Broken, record scratches back
at
The muse.
All the while,
The repetition reminds us of
Gyrations affixed
Upon
sticks of lunar might be
Ribbons of deranged hypotheses
Of
forgiveness
Alone,
a light
To
match, the strike
Of
promiscuity away,
From
Ecclesiastic rage—where shadows
Meant
for the naïve, those wanderers unattended to,
Not
intended for, beacon the wayward star-struck, structures
Divulged
of both ether and fidelity
So
sad, at this, twilit, late stage of night
Where
pine promotes its eternal scents,
And
the odor of stagnancy,
Fragrances
prophetic foreshadow
Wafting
amongst unsympathetic heirs
…And
the sound, it sounds a little less familiar,
Than
how it ought to, as the timeline trails.
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Man, Fred--you got me from line one with this one--panoramic writing--history and mystery, the heavens and the earth and human morass--with a final couplet that just rings--very much a feel of endings all through--elder states, elder gods, "...the wayward star-struck, structures/
ReplyDeleteDivulged of both ether and fidelity..." Fine job here.
um...nice engagement of the senses fred...all gritty through out...a hard bit of record scrath there in the middle when it comes to forgivenes...seems on the mind of many OLNers tonight...
ReplyDeleteVery deep and emotive Fred. Aging can be kind or so cruel too and yes, most of us are so ungrateful to know it is such a precious gift.
ReplyDeletehey Fred,
ReplyDeletei was hooked from the get go...the 1st stanza is a rush...a stunning opener which pulled me right into the depths of your exploration...this length suits your style too.
compressed and dense with great poetics and thought flow...great job bro...all the best buddy;)
I hate to think of the prophesy of pine! But clever thought nonetheless, and wonderful close. K.
ReplyDeleteWow... this required a second read through and I'm glad I did. Forgiving infidelity... that's tough.
ReplyDeletei'm a bit afraid of this last stage with all its limits and restrictions and whatever age brings..think there is a secret though and a promise in this period of time as well...
ReplyDeleteYour writing is full of meaning and images...some I understand, some I leave to read at another time. There is a poignancy and sadness in your words (at this late stage of night), maybe brought about by the end of the year.
ReplyDeleteWishing you cheers for the new year ~
Still not "too old for this ****" just yet haha, had to go there. The tadpole was a great enticing opener, truly set the pace and dragged me right in. Then up it swam, through some grit and made me think of age, bones cracking every which way surely can't be all the rage.
ReplyDeleteI feel as though I've been sucked down a wormhole with no way of knowing where I'm going to end up...and it's a freaking awesome feeling! The timeline does indeed slip, but seriously...I'll be propped on my front porch, cherishing every wrinkle, writing away to my metal and disturbing the other residents! :) Just doing what I do best...even when I'm on the final slip. If you're lucky enough to outlast that slip...then things such as infidelity turn to muse, and looking back, forgiveness is the only answer.You do realize I'm on my way to writing a book here on your blog as I slip and read in another direction...loving the trip though! In closing (for now) I do hope you enjoyed a wonderful Christmas, and here's to that brilliant pen standing strong in 2012~Write ON!
ReplyDeleteI really like this, Fred. the thoughts of time passing and past hurts creates a poignant atmosphere especially felt during this time of year.
ReplyDeleteI liked it my friend. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWish you have a great new year ahead.... May you have peace, love and prosperity ...
Shashi
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