To
be clever, I penned the most epic of tales
I
was coy, with my use of ink
As
I toyed with shades, deviating from black to pink
To
the letter, I smiled at my freshly painted grail
I
scrawled the most impressive verse,
With
words so grand, ‘twas impossible to rehearse
For
the better, I chose for my masterpiece to set sail
Upon
my very own flesh based canvassed skin
With
the very first character, from chest it would begin
But
was this wisdom? Never, for from each line would grow a tail,
Moments
after composition, I would stand for hours in admiration
While
the mirror’s smirking grin would purvey its mocking adulation
So
soon I’d grow much redder, upon recognition of my errs
Where
the text written on me, the mirror could not see,
Only
divining the reversal, a hieroglyphic incomprehensibility
And
there it rest, severed, embittered and stale
As
the wet rag would cloth me, erasing the scribbling clean,
A
solace ranged o’er me, for my acumen, forever’d go unseen
your love of poetry/words and investigation is ever present fred - energy as inspiration
ReplyDeleteI liked this hugely--the tail from the line, the scribbles on the skin, reddened, the unseen solace. K.
ReplyDeletenice...pen it boldly fred...i would hate to have verse forever to go unseen though to see it on my naked body well....haha...nicely penned...
ReplyDelete..the very own flesh based canvassed skin..don't we all paint and write on it..sometimes try to hide behind grand words but in the end it's raw, it's flesh and blood.. very interesting thoughts in this and powerful imagery fred
ReplyDeleteAhh but it didn't go unseen, it's all here for us to read. Blood, sweat and tears. Very nice read Fred. Image filled and deep.
ReplyDeleteNice twist in this one on that whole taking ourselves ultraseriously thing we all get into about our stuff sometimes, so solemn and grand--I love the words growing a tail and ending up backwards and nonsense in the mirror. Good stuff, Fred.
ReplyDeleteI felt like I was on an expressive journey. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteYou make the unseen seen today. With your display. And look at you forming it up, rhyming the beginning through without a hiccup and the last to as well, have to tip my rhyming cup. But why erase it clean, as it truly must be seen. Oh and blogger like you again..haha
ReplyDeleteOur words may seem perfect and grand..but unless shared and read by others, I think, is much better ending. It can influence and move hearts and thoughts. Keep on writing...
ReplyDeletetercets working well for you here, the end-rhyme too. I like how you've interlocked stanzas by rhyming the first line of each tercet. Tight piece Fred, cheers
ReplyDeleteFred, great job with the rhyme scheme and clever poeming as well. Enjoy the holidays.
ReplyDeleteThe self critic has been responsible for many first drafts lost. It's so good, and then sometimes the next day it loses it goodness, grown tail and maybe horns and warts.
ReplyDeleteWonderful rhyme going in this one. An appropriate bard's lament.