Saturday, June 25, 2011

Secrets within the Serf

Random generation
Of mergers and acquisitions
Of protection
To serve; secure
The secrets within the serf

Different collaboration
Of sort and ilk
Of encryption
To unite; unify
The secrets within the serf

Splintered combination
Of clusters and meanings
Of integrity
To instill; beacon
The secrets within the serf

Indentured
Chains bind; Anklets define
The secrets within the serf
Breed independence; gives freedom life

10 comments:

  1. nice subtle social commentary...and now it is more class based for sure in the US...more and more each day...

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  2. Really like the first line of each one how you started with generation, making it a collaboration, through combination, then indentured, nicely played.

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  3. Brian, thanks for the comments. I appreciate them. Glad you enjoyed this piece. I'm glad you noticed the social aspect, I was afraid I was a bit too subtle Thanks for visiting:)

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  4. Pat, glad to see you enjoyed this piece. Happy to see you on this Sunday. Thanks for stopping by, your feedback is always appreciated:)

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  5. a beautiful piece on complex life/society.

    keep us inspired.
    Bless you.

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  6. Random generation
    Of mergers and acquisitions
    Of protection
    To serve; secure
    The secrets within the serf
    ...

    ...thought provoking lines...intriguing piece.

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  7. Jingle, glad you liked the poem, thanks for the visit:)

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  8. Dasuntoucha, good to see a new face around here, hope you like the poems. Glad you liked this piece. Anyhow, welcome to my mixed up reality and hope to see you around again, thanks:)

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  9. Excellent Fred =) I agree with Brian, brilliant

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  10. Mindlovemisery, glad you enjoyed this piece, not so sure about brilliant, but I'll take the compliment any day, thanks so much:)

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