It’s
the scar tissue type
of hope,
the kind that’s
drawn too far past—
the frayed
lines
of
sympathetic appeal—
It’s
the moistened blanket
twice
applied to feverish brows—
molested
by dampening tears
escaping
their shadow’s cell
It’s
the weathered apparel
hesitantly
breathing
yet
often lacking the design
of
symmetry—
dividing the pangs of ulcers deep;
below the crested veil, yet well above
the coded resolve—
It’s
these battles
waged
in a cuneiform of turmoil
amongst
the bridging gaps of confused allegiance—
where
cultural dignity is pitted so squarely
against
the necessities of economy
It’s
the imposter behind the curtain
in
the back room with the purposefully darkened
panes
of glass
“Not the one where…”
“Yes,
that’s the one…
where good mothers and fathers alike,
tell tales of exaggerated consequence
before
applying the forehead’s midnight kiss goodnight”
It’s
these stories
that can make one wonder what exactly was seen
to prompt such tales, that are remembered all too
easily
was
it an unnatural gleam—
or a bothersome tic—that
marred
the desired fabric of their creations frequency
It’s
the words of a storyteller, relaying:
warnings—
as subtle overtures of persuasion,
unintended
to incite implication,
yet
performed, in such a way,
where a tad too little premonition,
is
weighed upon, as to how
potential
seeds
already
have been,
inadvertently
delivered somehow—
never considering the fragility of
a child’s
mind, where fractured
and faulty filters have yet been taught
It’s
these moments
of self-revelation
that
act as epiphanies—
as warnings
of
what could be,
if we,
choose not to act
accordingly
It’s
these memories
that we remember all too well,
as
we sit
patiently behind
our
darkened
panes of glass
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Really a fabulous write Fred! And I loved hearing it read--your work in general works well that way I think--Nice!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is so true of how some parents do scare their kids with tales of dire consequences 'if' this or 'if' that isn't...
ReplyDeleteDeep thinking here Fred, very vivid imagery too.
Not sure where they come from, but passed down they are and they continue such a feat grinding at our existence and such with each passing day, some grand, most not so grnad, but they are told one way or another, for whatever reason, such stories will always be there I suppose.
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem and it's always wonderful to hear you read. I was reading today that hope isn't an emotion (warm feeling of optimism and possibility) though emotion plays a supporting role. It's actually a cognitive process made up of goals, pathways and agency. We set realistic goals, figure out how to achieve them, and believe in ourselves. I also wrote about vulnerability but from another angle :).
ReplyDeletemmm...too afraid to act because of what we have been warned will happen if we do..programmed just to follow all the other lambs to the slaughter...
ReplyDelete"It’s the imposter behind the curtain
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panes of glass"--Is this the story itself? That puts the unnatural shutters on vision and self hood?
The format echoes the frame of mind of the narrator, and is an apt device as a medium for the thematic experience.
ReplyDeletenever considering the fragility of
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and faulty filters have yet been taught... really spoke to me in more than one way..not going into details..but i think that's really well woven and you touch different things here fred
Darkened panes of glass. I think my glass didn't use to be dark and i know it from recalling (still being able to recall) how it is supposed to be. Interesting how sometimes as one grows older, one seems more unsure of where one is going at times. Interesting thoughts from this one.
ReplyDeleteScary to think how one can go wrong as a parent. Makes you think what war does to a child's psyche. Fear for life whether repressed or not. And the way you presented this matches the content beautifully. Still can't get the sound to work. Didn't you use soundcloud at one time? That worked for me.
ReplyDeletenever considering the fragility of
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and faulty filters have yet been taught
Yes, sometimes we are so engrossed in relaying our thinking but oblivious to the effects on a child's mind. The danger is that once told to a child it sticks for a long while. It may be unsettling for him. Great write Fred!
Hank
One does become a product of all this difficult-to-trace moments and warnings, etc. Your poem goes through the layers. k.
ReplyDeleteepic piece - you really have a great style
ReplyDeleteYou create a most excellent shape here fred; the lines and the ideas therein and the reading hammers home the dislocation of space and thought... the seperation of it all is superb and delivered with the skill of a poet
ReplyDeleteknowing the sense of their own work heightens my reaction... V. absorbing and captivatingly executed...
nice work bro
Oooweee, nothing really to say, spinning in words and trying to clean stained glass....
ReplyDeleteReally nice.
I'm still very much enjoying your work, and there is a definite tone of voice in your pieces that is uniquely yours.
ReplyDeleteThank you. The comment really means a lot to me. I'm really glad you're enjoying my writing. I really appreciate it. Thanks
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