So
close, forever far
disjointed,
fragmented shards—
all
there ever seems to be
Unhinging
every high we see
collapsing
curtains of such fragility,
tapestries,
ever locked unto mind
Distorting
the truth, accepting fully each it’s many lies,
relentlessly
altering each potential there’s yet to find—
never
nearer, than that of a fallen star
So
close, forever far
The cat always likes the rhyme and surely not a crime. But yeah seems life is mostly this way no matter what we try, almost there but one little thing just fecks us up and back to forever far.
ReplyDeletenever nearer than that of a fallen star... how big a distance... also the collapsing curtains.. always sad when there's such distance with someone we're so close..
ReplyDeletenice lamenting feel to this man...and nice touches in the fragility....and how it touches each potential future as well....
ReplyDeletedeft melancholy fred... well crafted wax and wane
ReplyDeleteillustrates meaning with a neat lull and the touch
of a deep background pulling heavily on glimmering
words...
cheers fred