Friday, November 25, 2011

Outtakes From the Block File (Shaping Sounds)


I've been out of it the past few days.  I haven't had the time to really focus on much of anything, and writing happens to fall into this space.  However, as luck would have it, I still had a few words, Perimeter, Radii, Swelling and clay.  So from the last of the most recent session, here is the last outtake from the Block File. 

Perimeter’s
Expanding
With every
Stretch

Circumference’s
Swelling
With all
Within

Diameter
Radii
Side to side

Symmetrical
Mound of clay
Forming
Asymmetrical
Sounds

Anger
Held in check
By foreign objects
Grasped by hand

Solution;
To the puzzling,
Equations of soul

Shut it down
Flip the switch
No, which, up, out
Dissolve
This acuteness
Of obtusely
Framed
Formulae

5 comments:

  1. Hey it worked well with a few words you had to tell. reminding me of math though and those damn shapes that were droned on and on about with each mathly shout, ewww, hahaha.

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  2. like the last little bit the best...too much turkey stretching the circumference? smiles.

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  3. I like the geometrical terms used this way. It sounds like something about to explode, luckily held in check, a hand gripping something and a struggle to resolve the rage. "Framed formulae" -- seems to refer to things that automatically sets one off. One does seem to work on a formula when something that doesn't bothers others, bothers me. Puzzling.

    Like this one. :)

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  4. The first two stanzas sound like me after Thanksgiving dinner!

    Seriously, very cool write.

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  5. Rea;;u g;ad you all enjoyed this piece. Sometimes with outtakes you're not really sure the reaction you'll get. Yeah, after reading these comments, I totally get the thanksgiving residual idea, probably was on the mind as I tried to make form from a few lingering words. Anyhow, really appreciate the feedback, Thanks

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