Had some other things to do today, so I took a poem I had done a long, long while back and remixed it so to speak, changing a few words, structuring it a little and adding in a bit of projective verse. Am working on some new pieces as well, and am planning on getting around to catch up on all the sites I've been not able to visit the past few days. Anyhow.
Rain
keeps dropping
at
my feet,
feet,
feet
I
look up
To
the grey cloaked sky
and
watch the drops fall
and
watch the drops fall d
o
w
n
The
grass fills
Its
thirst is quenched
The
water pools on the pavement
Into
cracks
it
seeps
seeps
seeps
I
hear the sounds
From
below
So
down stairs I do go
Flip
on the lights
Flip
that switch
And
watch
As
all things stored
Are
f l o a t I n g
by
I’m
soon joined
By
a concerned pair
Of
eyes
No
purring
As
he meows
As
his bathroom dr If ts slowly by
I
put on my coat
And
head on out
To
the car I will go
But
first
Raindrops
Keep
f
A
L
L
I
N
G at my feet
Feet
feet
How beautiful -to watch the rain in the company of a purring cat
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Such a cheater using an older one. You under those damn bleachers again?..hahaha
ReplyDeleteDidn't mean to rain on your parade, couldn't help myself. Like how you made them all at your feet, could be thought of as tears, your own type of rain, or that you protected yourself from the rain and all the other crap life throws at you, letting everything fall at your feet. Isn't that neat?
Nice word play and sound effects - raindrops hitting near your feet (feet feet). Catchy. :)
ReplyDeletevery cool fred...love the concrete aspects of this...and the echo at the end is hot...i like man...
ReplyDeleteYou've really made images here from words! Very cool. K.
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