Thursday, August 4, 2011

Treble Drift


Over time- 
-As distance grows
         Trebles drift-
         -While timbres slow

Shivered
In drapes of bless

Splinters
Depths cold defaced
By spired curve
& Dark cloth

Silencing nether
Voices outreach
Past personification
To the heart of speech
From touch-less tongue
To vapors seen
                           Embracing
         The swaddled
Child

4 comments:

  1. Was not expecting the finish! You brought that one home brilliantly! And love the dVerse shout as well. Have I told you lately, YOU ROCK!

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  2. Really great pace to this one, just rolls off the tongue and I flew right through it. Nicely done.

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  3. ok i like the flow and the sounds...and i think i got it but i am not sure...

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  4. I love this one another fantastic piece and I agree the flow is excellent. Thank you so much for all your encouragements

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