Tuesday, August 2, 2011

Louse


Louse
Dangling
Down

Parochial
Exalted
Reprimand

Flagellate
Flog
Wince
Nod

Crumpled mess
Aware yet you deny
The reasons why
Pavlov’s dog ran away

5 comments:

  1. ha, love that last stanza...like the minimalist single word flow...

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  2. Yeah if I was his dog I'd run away too, for all the reasons above and more..haha, great little run down, nice ending, had no idea that's where it was going.

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  3. Glad you guys enjoyed this quickie here, thanks for stopping by

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  4. I love this one Fred very well done and I loved the one before too about the 3 Fates that's always fascinated me

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  5. Mindlovemisery, thanks so much, they've always fascinated me as well, I've used them quite a bit in various writing ventures, nothing basically their own piece before here though. Glad you enjoyed the piece, I'm honored:)

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