Over time-
-As distance grows
Trebles drift-
-While timbres slow
Shivered
In drapes of bless
Splinters
Depths cold defaced
By spired curve
& Dark cloth
Silencing nether
Voices outreach
Past personification
To the heart of speech
From touch-less tongue
To vapors seen
Embracing
The swaddled
Child
Was not expecting the finish! You brought that one home brilliantly! And love the dVerse shout as well. Have I told you lately, YOU ROCK!
ReplyDeleteReally great pace to this one, just rolls off the tongue and I flew right through it. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteok i like the flow and the sounds...and i think i got it but i am not sure...
ReplyDeleteI love this one another fantastic piece and I agree the flow is excellent. Thank you so much for all your encouragements
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