scantily
clad—
amidst
the direst of conditions—
as
dead heats flare
an
ice-bled blush—
pinks,
whites and lavenders—
erupting
loose the triaged carousel
once
tousled, vain and empty,
now
similar basins sting in stirred
repeals
of fluidity
as
drains of hopeful restitution watch,
enlightened
glaziers form the ringlet’s pond—
though
terse, respectful still—
of
that which the flowered petal’s stem
has
to offer
a
variance of interpretations,
emboss
the torn glimmer’s
layered
tiers—caressing
intermingled
pools—
rainbow
flavored flooding
displaced
by streams
of
glacial floe
append
the scansions
of
latticework—
once
built upon
tethered
spines
of
dreams
unfiltered
ok i wont claim to understand it completely...lots of interesting imagery...and interesting progression as well from hot to cold to melt...to rainbows and dreams...the last stanza kinda helped me see it for what it was in the imagery above it...
ReplyDeleteI like your word play and your images of cold... Ice-bled blush..whew ~
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Stuck to our wants or desires holding us down as we don't look elsewhere and stayed tethered to them, not accepting anything else that could be better. That's what I took away from your verse, very true too. As unfiltered we try to be but are weighed down and filtered, even in an unknowing capactiy.
ReplyDeleteI just love that last stanza!
ReplyDeleteTethered suggest being stuck in a limited space, such that the only way go is to build layer upon layer. Floe is making me see thin layers of ice, slippery sliding over each other and such, bending, blending, creating what might be a rainbow range of ideas or properties. Interesting to read. :)
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