Saturday, May 5, 2012

Inner Scission


Viewings
of imbalance and
proportional depth
clutter first
then clot in
permanence

Space, tiny dots,
codes, freckles,
pips 
turnstile
a-round
into void
less
optical incoherencies

Eversion shifts
ballast
two
instable
weights form….

                  

7 comments:

  1. Like the rhyme and flow as away you go. Also the way you weave and distort a shape with the verse was great. Shifting and forming much like life and all the surrounds.

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  2. ha...cool flow to this...and i like...could not tell you what is means completely

    the turnstyles around line is really cool...

    and AVENGERS rocked my face off...it was good man...

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  3. I like the visuals in this poem, Fred.

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  4. I was puzzled, yet fascinated by your verse.

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  5. I kinda imagine images being broken into little dots and then simply dissipated into the black space. Wonder what happens after the last line, do they all collapse into a point or forever spread out, like our physical universe.

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  6. The opening was strongest for me-- the clutter and clots of imbalance something I can very much relate to. K.

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  7. this reminds me of the sky somehow...or was that a subliminal effect from your background? ha.

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