Friday, February 10, 2012

Separated From Punctuation


An educational dusting
         Spasmodic brushstrokes through the paint
An international rustling
         Unraveling its chains

An optical hustling
Charismatic movements ‘cross the eye
An allegorical rusting
         Displacement of the sky

It’s frightening
         It’s categorical
It’s frightening
         It’s disorder in a box

Fade, fast, fade-asleep
Fade, fast, drift-deep
To a place, a special place
Where rectangles have hearts
And the dots find homes
Even when…             
Separated from punctuation

3 comments:

  1. I can be seperated time and time again, as I don't watch and just type fast. Although quite funny when you say one thing yet mean another. Unless you say fluck and then miss then L, that can truly be hell..lol

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  2. Oh, this is cool. Love the flow of the words, and those last four lines just kill.

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  3. nice fred...def some great lines and flow...my fav part though is def...

    Fade, fast, fade-asleep
    Fade, fast, drift-deep
    To a place, a special place
    Where rectangles have hearts
    And the dots find homes
    Even when…
    Separated from punctuation

    those first two lines are like a record scratch...

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