I. CAGE OF SIN
In
this age of terminal belligerency
A
hex, a pox is placed upon thee—
Tingeing
forth the pummeled plant
pressing
through the groveling glass—
Thine
heirs be slain,
in
judgment for thy sins,
Each
those chosen prior to
and
the ones yet coming to pass
Silence
these ne’er-do-wells
housed
enslaved, voicing perditions
for
which man’s inner weakness craves
Dwell
in the aged moment’s freeze in time
linger
long ere thy dreams clash therein
Fore
in such a place, amidst the blinded vermin,
friends
be replaced by the slithering tongue,
within the wretched serpent’s cage of sin
II. A Signature upon Shedding Skin
Beware
the pomegranate kind—
sacrificing
winter, for a fleeting summer’s moonlight dance
Bathe
long in thy sweated skin—
before
ye blood hath spilt upon demon’s pact
Return
ye shan’t; regret falls moot
for
what has waxed, will surely wane—
Returning
all thy suffering—from fathoms deep
to
an ever weeping flame charred sky
When
debt comes due,
redress
accrues the interest kept
III. Forcing the Hand of God
While
thy prayers be pronounced,
And
thy annunciation understood—
The
heavens must flood forth its tears,
flowing
forward, despite—because
of
God’s ever-existing paternal love
Yet—because
thy scrolls be scribed
by
bloodied pen:
Thy penitence must be denied,
Thy soul, to Hell, must be sent,
And
such is the price one pays
for
abandoning:
Thy belief in ye self,
Trust in God’s will
Thy Faith—Thy wisdom—
That God shalt keep ye safe
And
such is the fate,
of
men who:
Fraternize with unholy
beasts—
Break bread at
demonic feasts—
And
there is no saving
A
man consumed by deicide
I was late also so I thought I would drop by yours early...
ReplyDeleteGrim piece, grim.
Wander
Thanks for stopping by, appreciate the thoughts
DeleteYou know I myself think this year is crunch time. Maybe the whole world feels it too and that's why there's so much chaos all over it. I think we will all pay the price for our folly, eventually.
ReplyDeleteThis is a warning to all of us, really. get your crap sorted out before its too late.
Nice one Fred.
DDT, thanks, folly does seem to be abound, and I have to think that folly in general is ok, it's when the sick stuff comes to play, the things man does to his fellow man etc…but more so the utter lack in spirituality that exists, some of the things that go on today reminds me of the things I read about the dark ages a bit. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Thanks
DeleteGood lord hon, you can write! lol
ReplyDeleteThis is fantastic...like an old scripture of wisdom! So much in your work is awe inspiring :) I read and sit back, calmly gathering the elements lol
Brilliant! xoxo
Poppy, oh, thank you, I really did want the piece to come out sounding as if it was torn out from some ancient script-so glad that came through- so glad you enjoyed the piece and thank you so much for the compliments. Thanks
Deletewhew...this is def almost prophecy, esp that last bit....gave me a shiver in knowing where i did not want to go...ha...and i like pomegranate but i may need to reconsider that now...smiles.
ReplyDeleteglad you liked the piece. hmm.. prophecy, I can see what you mean, that's cool. Haha, i used to love pomegranate, but started talking a pill a few years ago and it's on the label to avoid, but no need to reconsider the fine fruit, as I used pomegranate as a reference to Persephone who ate the seeds and was forced to spend half her days in Hades. Appreciate the comments, Thanks again.
Deletehey fred - blistering write buddy - that first couplet
ReplyDeletesank its claws in and i held on tight for the the journey - biblical brutal - pried from the claws of a big lizard long dead... whats not to like? :)
oh dang...powerful and gritty write...at time feels like a punch in the stomach...you paint images here that make me wanna close my eyes because it's so hard to face them...
ReplyDeleteDeicide is a subject wrought with vitriolic and abhorrent ideas that you illuminate well through phrases like 'blinded vermin'; 'terminal belligerency'; 'wretched serpent’s cage of sin'; 'penitence denied'; and 'regret falls moot'. This has a heraldic feel while employing wicked word play worthy of Old Testament portraits of wrath. Great work.
ReplyDeleteThis was like the anti - lords prayer! Loved the stylings- the form- the classical feel- reminded me of some heavy shit like Milton- paradise lost. Pure fire and brimstone
ReplyDeleteFred, I felt chills. This is strong and prophetic. The tension is palpable. Well written.
ReplyDeleteAgree there's a heavy Biblical tone to this, very effective, too--and of course, they say if you believe in the Devil, you kinda have to believe in god--not that I completely agree there--anyway I digress--liked all of this Fred, but especially the way the second part developed the theme so lyrically--'the pomegranate kind' great mythological reference.
ReplyDeleteStrong and gripping write....I specially like the last stanza ~
ReplyDeleteThy penitence must be denied,
Thy soul, to Hell, must be sent,
And such is the price one pays
for abandoning ~
Happy day to you ~
Wow you brought the grit out of the gate today, sounds like something they would ue on display on some tv show, where they rant about the end of days and how it must be stopped. Flowed so damn well, you truly out did yourself this time I have to tell
ReplyDeleteWow, this is just an amazing piece...love the old school, "fire and brimstone" tone of it, lots of layers to explore too. Wonderful!
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