Thursday, March 29, 2012

(Un)

Unemployed
Uninsured
Yet
Unimaginably
Unabashed


Understandably
Unhappy
Yet
Unabatedly 
Undeterred


Uniquely Unimpressed
Uniquely Underwhelmed
Yet
Unanimously
Unwavering

Until

Undiscovered Unwillingnesses
Undistractedly Undermine
Unyieldingly

Until
Untold Unpleasantries
Unravel Unctions
Underneath

Until
Unsalvageable
Underpinnings
Unveil

Yet Until
Uncurable Undercurrents
Uncompromisingly Unbend


I'll still believe

Unceasingly







2 comments:

  1. Unbelievable how unrelenting you were with your un run, fun though. Like the structure of it and how hope and despair play like ying and yang. No matter the crap that comes due, ones must push through. But no unrhyming things, that would never do at my wings..haha

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  2. I never thought alliteration could ever work right through a poem, word after word. I was wrong. And the spit in the eye at the end to say you ain't quitting.. love this one, Fred

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