Hip out, gait is locked
Stagger, stagger,
throb
Throb, throb, stagger
on
Tourniquets separated
Create apartheid tween
The numb and warm
…here flesh be
tampered with
trod upon , with heels
twisting, twisting
in turn, turning into,
such a twisted halt
if where what was, only
to at first regain balance,
they grind about still
well after, after realizing it
is not the beach that
they writhe upon…
The skin’s been known,
to
Ever so slowly
retract, explode,
As do the granulated
bits expunged
From vase to sea…
Fine, fine fragments,
found
Broken, templates
blurred, then bound,
life lags, lingering
long, across the tides and
through the ponds,
where waves lament the flooding components of a time torn upon, spun, into a
peril, unwound, unwrapped, by the crying wilderness that remains, untamed, to
this day, a time untrained, to see beyond the passions of those emotions denying
safe passage to and from,
With or without such directives
that were to be, so directly implicated into what would be, a vision, THE
vision,
and now, that vision
is nothing more than a vision, one that has destructed, distracted many more seamen far,
far greater than thee, sailors with visions of their own, dreams, dreams that
often rappel the journey’s leg up high, way beyond horizon’s sky, unto those lines,
lines that coat the crags and corners of a soon to be, mountain-yet-to-be-scaled
and flagged…and, and, and…it still climbs
Past the precipice one
can’t peak
Through the tunnels
sight can’t see
Within the quivering
voice that cannot speak such languages purposely composed as being left
intently incomplete as to where it’s words, are words made from sounds, sounds the
tongue simply wont learn
And
they swirl about,
Through
each canal
Down
the blockades path,
through
the perimeters caged off
and
bent.
Yet….
it’s all but noise
You
cannot hear the voice
as
it never truly says anything
Not
until
This
moment
Where
the lock is picked
And
the trellis falls
Leaving
vines, vines, various and tall,
They
are
Sprouting
up
And
shooting out
Where
duets at dawn
Find
the through and through, a down-ward arc, spiral in reverse, noticing the
fortifications of a sun yet born, wherein fortifying all it’s every form
By,
and with, its trademark limp
you
are collected
along
with your wavering will,
somewhat assertively, mind you,
Some
days we make
Some
days we are made
from
model clay,
from
collages painted
from
a palette of images
you’ve
been collecting
ever
since you first departed the
weaving
womb,
here
the seamstress sews a carving breath,
ever
birthing the unburied banalities
that
somehow always freshen the scenes, the scent
that
you
and
you
alone
tend
to
See…
A
talisman
One To guide?
If
then, then I ask,
to where?
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Some days we make
ReplyDeleteSome days we are made
from model clay,
from collages painted
from a palette of images
you’ve been collecting
ever since you first departed the
weaving womb,
nice...i love that bit fred, lot of truth in it...but also like the rather subversive thought that picks the lock and slips the gate....smiles.
I must say my mind was swirling within this vision, Fred; but I did enjoy the word play and your clever twists with words. Ah yes, and the question....where will the guide lead? And does one want to follow?
ReplyDeleteEpic, this piece. Lots of details, like a winding lane.
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Great flow today at your show, as with every other day and like the thought of the tongue never learning, as that can be taken many a way and it surely never ever does learn, making it's owner or some other person feel a burn.
ReplyDeleteHere...the seamstress draws a carving breath...Fred Ruthorford! This is absolutely delicious! The reading is fantastic, your voice lending even another layer to its depth...oh, this evening is going to be fun indeed! Happy OpenLinkNight Poet...I'll see you at the pub!
ReplyDeleteha...great closure..finding our way..not always easy...and now, that vision is nothing more than a vision...good thoughts in this fred
ReplyDeleteLots of word associations here that I really enjoyed. And there is a narrative that keeps it moving throughout to the great ending. Very, very well done.
ReplyDeleteI liked the bit Brian picked out. But for me, too loose, too long without a coherence I can feel. So I would not have seen it if Brian had not picked it out. So for my sort of reader, shorter and more focused would help.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting poem - especially the close I thought. I certainly need a guide! And the idea of somedays one makes, some one is made -- I think perhaps the making may be an illusion though one I certainly like. k.
ReplyDeleteFantastic flow, as the reader I was able to float one the tips of your words through the images you create.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
ReplyDeletemachine gun delivery, rapid repeats that pop:
finding a sweet spot in the rythmn and cool tone
coming together in some V effective Amalgamations of most excellence!
Hip out, gait is locked
Stagger, stagger, throb
Throb, throb, stagger on
Tourniquets separated
Create apartheid tween
The numb and warm
really catching my attention with the delivery of the opening volley fred:
all the best bro
Enjoyed this, Fred!
ReplyDeleteThere is such intensity in this, Fred, and your delivery adds so much to strength.
ReplyDeleteFred, you really outdid yourself with this one--so many words and images that I loved--hard to pick just one--Brian picked out one of my fav stanzas, and then "Past the precipice one can't peak"--clever and so well done, also loved the duets at dawn. Exceptional :-)
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