Captive of This House, photographed by Moondustwriter |
Face fleshed press to glass
In a prism of this stifling
Cartography—
Uncharted
waves of tempered light
Spatially charged with a dimension
Infused
into all
Memories remain, yet
soon shall fade
Clinging
tight you dare not cede
The last shreds of
Life
and dignity
And I wonder why
Why’d you evade the reaping?
How is it his sickle found not
thee?
Are you afraid, of how things
will be,
When fragments are all that
remain,
Incessantly tormenting with their sparse refrains?
I don’t know whether to smile
or cry
I can’t decide if should pray for the reaper’s
return
For I can’t see a fate forever resembling vengeance—
And
here I must cry, for hell never had you in its plans…
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Love the opening lines and this line will haunt me: "Uncharted waves of tempered light"
ReplyDeletehell never had plans for you...well that is a good thing...would suck to be forever stuck you know....as a ghost in the middle...at least i would think...smiles...cool piece man...
ReplyDeleteand i like seeing you more so hope the funk has flown the coop
For hell never had you in its plans...FRED! That line alone cements this piece as a favorite for me...what a amazing build up to a killing blow finish...works amazingly well with Leslie's awesome image too...quite a pairing creators! :) And I'm back to the drawing board again ;)
ReplyDeleteI say avoid such a thing, don't bring it back. It might give you a heart attack or drag you to hellwith Freddy and Jason, maybe Myers too. That would not be a fun crew.
ReplyDeleteThis has the basis of a good old horror story! Chilling indeed and deep, deep, deep...
ReplyDeleteExcellent delivery a poemI want to read over and over but I'm afraid to ...
ReplyDeleteThere are two voices speaking in this piece
one very old
Thanks for this Wake Up!!!
Powerful Fred!
ReplyDeleteHell never had plans for you...thank goodness it didn't. It gives such pain to think of a child stuck between death and life...Such depth in this one!
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