Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Central Waters




A varied strain upon forgetful sins
where therapeutic measurements
may strangely dictate, a stance of
protracted ignorance when deep
bruising’s unearth— It is often
sage advice, to shatter all and any,
large to shard, splices of contradiction
that could undermine the shared experience
of the truthful tone—

Breaking this façade, where all time heals old wounds, in
mental mannerisms bound to suffering, is but a known agitation of
the scars of ones past, buried, interred well beyond what
even surface logic could detect, is but a diviner of internal
justice, foretelling the honesty that pervades this directionless
mass of indiscretion, known, to this point, as the last known remnants
of what was but a partially-lived, previous existence.

Vague perimeters are constructed,
shielding feral interference from indiscriminately rearing its unwelcomed range of questioning—the signals spike when patterns of
detrimental discourse are urged before a susceptible crowd….we ask not, what eventually becomes of such words….

You came to CENTRAL WATERS
to see what you could find
You came to CENTRAL WATERS
with deception burdening your mind

You came to CENTRAL WATERS
to see if still a light could shine
You came to CENTRAL WATERS
yet the lies have bound you blind

To discover what is delivering concurrent
is but a vestige of re-creation, a smiting taste
of the venom, in which forced us from our homes

Unknowingly this led us in search of new terrain,
offering many tears to shed, for the boundaries blurred before
yet, in spite of intent, you re-acclimate the buried strains
siring futures laced by burden; inciting…an advanced discourse of pain 

You came to CENTRAL WATERS
to find yourself a home
You came to CENTRAL WATERS
to evade those forces unopposed

You came to CENTRAL WATERS
for the promise of rebirth
You came to CENTRAL WATERS
for the lore spoken of in poem

Instead of finding freedom
you’ve spread the shackles of disdain
despite the promise spoken of in verse
your presence has once again, awoken forth this curse

They took you in, they cleansed your wounds and made
you, a stranger, one of their own—only to become a facsimile of the place you’ve tried run from

Where at first promise flourished amidst your grasp,
all seemed deistic to such the whetted glance—but
paradise, to an infectious scourge, is but a wealth for
this virus to explore—

You came to CENTRAL WATERS
thinking the past had been disowned
You came to CENTRAL WATERS
with only the best intentions planned

Yet, as is the case with purity,
it only takes but a singular encounter
to forever redefine its form

Yet, as is the case with poetry,
it harvests all emotion, as the tempest’s seeds be sown
where infliction redresses its viral chords
bludgeoning the innocent’s chaste accord
with an evil…an evil distinctly your own…

Another Tuesday is upon us, and the lovely Natasha is tending bar over at D'Verse for Open Link Night.  Make sure you stop on by and enjoy the amazing poetry that permeates the night.  

On a side note, been kind of out of it the past few days, really didn't get much of anything accomplished.  I did get a chance to read, Manic Daily's wonderful posting about the "Unexpected," she wrote for this past Saturday's Poetics though. 

I also read through many of the poems linked up, and have to say, I just didn't have it in me to reply, to do much of anything really, but out of the twenty or thirty poems I personally was able to read, outstanding is the word that consistently came to mind.   It was a great theme, and I actually spent a good deal of time pondering it, to which, sparked an idea for a short story.  For those with the time and care to read, I did post it over at my wordpress site.

12 comments:

  1. cool...will check out your short story here in a bit...intriguing tale in your verse as well...the part that got me was the coming to the place and them taking you in only to end up the facsimile of what you were running from...seems an age old story that keeps repeating...

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  2. Yet, as is the case with purity,
    it only takes but a singular encounter
    to forever redefine its form' - ain't that the truth - just one slip and all innocence is shed - wonderful Fred - xx Lib

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  3. At Carry on Tuesday today their prompt was to use this:
    Life isn't about what happens to you, it's about how you handle what happens.
    Your poem is so much about that Fred. Life truly is as good or as bad as we let it be and we humans can make it either one.
    I do hope you're feeling better today.

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  4. A bleak tale from the center. Read as orwellian. Yet for all the doomsday saying perhaps there may still be hope. "Keep walking past those open windows" said John Irving in Hotel California. It's worth remembering I think.

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  5. One little thing can lead to another and another, all over the place and a little drift goes into a far off place or just gets one a smack to the face haha, glad you are back with it too, did zombie foot scare you? hahahaha

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  6. i like that you always come back to the central waters..this feels like the heart of your poem where i can hear it beating loudest..

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  7. There is so much depth in what you write. I must read it again. I get a melancholy feeling from it. We try and try and life always leads us to our basic nature. So, we keep returning to the central waters, to revive us.

    You are a thinker. I like that. Hope your energy has returned.

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  8. Breaking this façade, where all time heals old wounds, in
    mental mannerisms bound to suffering....not easy and like Claudia I like that you always come back to central waters. Good capture.

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  9. Interesting poem, Fred. I love the repetition. I often hear complaints regarding repetition in writing and poetry, but I personally love to employ its use. I think this is the first time listening to your spoken word - it's very nice. You have a wonderful speaking voice.

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  10. I would mind being a stranger to myself...how do I get to this Central Waters place?

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  11. Really like this piece, Fred. The part about how things fall back to seem the same as previous stands out for me. So much in this poem seems to speak to me. "Central Waters" would probably be the right place to recalibrate, come back to, go out again, perhaps not looking for a place to be but to look for destinations to explore.

    Hope you're feeling better, Fred.

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