I wrote this a while back, but I think it fits in with this week's Wake-Up theme. Well, anyhow...
Please listen to the recording, to get the full flavor of the piece.
I
went for a walk with my nieces two…
Down
the street and by the school…
The
three of us watching all there was to see
‘twas
when appeared the first so free
little
birdie spoke to we
tweet,
tweet, tweet
and
so our little walk grew to four
the
girls said they hoped for more
until
we glanced a monkey in a tree
tossing
banana peels with glee
…..ooh,
ooh, ooh, ooh
The
bird returned and spoke its mind
Tweet,
tweet, tweet
And
now our little walk had climbed to five
The
girls loved how the group thrived
And
on we went a little more
‘twas
when we met a little cat
who
thought he was so mighty fat
Meow
he called to us
To
which the monkey and the bird replied
And
now our little walk grew to six
The
girls loved the mix
Until
there came a cow so tame,
It
chimed its bell and spoke it’s name
Moo,
moo, moo
And
the bird replied in kind
The
monkey chose to speak its mind
The
cat went meow
And
so our little walk turned to seven
The
girls thought this was animal heaven
Until
we saw duck
Quack,
quack, quack
The
cow said hello
The
monkey then did bellow
While
the bird went tweet
And
the cat meowed with intent
As
our little walk became eight
The
girls thought this was so great
Until
we saw a frog,
ribbit
Playing
games on his log
They
said hello, but the monkey yawned
The
cat meowed and the bird went tweet
The
cow was quiet, but soon he did greet
While
the duck simply quacked by its feet
what
began as three was now nine
The
girls thought this walk was mighty fine
Until
we came to a little dog
Chained
up still barking a song
And
the Cat went Meow
The
Bird did tweet
The
monkey spoke
And
the frog took a poke
Then
the cow went moo
While
the duck always kept his cool
As
our little walk became ten
the
girls have always loved our walks since then
For those of you that enjoy children's stories, I highly recommend you stopping by Pat Hatt's Site, where he has links, or simply going to Amazon and searching for his name. You'll find a series of kiddie books, which are all very good, enjoyable for kids and adults alike.
For those of you that enjoy children's stories, I highly recommend you stopping by Pat Hatt's Site, where he has links, or simply going to Amazon and searching for his name. You'll find a series of kiddie books, which are all very good, enjoyable for kids and adults alike.
ha this was fun...i like all the things you can see and in writing for kids you have to look through their eyes a bit at the things they would notice for sure...i love taking walks and my boys do as well..
ReplyDeleteI like this, Fred. All the more enjoyable when I listened to you read it!
ReplyDeletehaha this would surely be enjoyed with all the animals about making noise. The cat would surely meow and then have the bird for lunch, at least that is my hunch haha. I don't find them hard to do, as in a day I can come up with 4 or so with ease, I guess I just have creative fleas haha and thanks for the shout.
ReplyDeleteI think you should submit this, Fred... it's great!
ReplyDeleteHaha...I really enjoyed this Fred. Even my little dog lifted his head at some of your animal noises...haha
ReplyDeleteWhat a great imagination you have to do all this and I really loved hearing you speak/sing it as opposed to just reading it.
Fantabulous!
Ha! Very charming, Fred. It's very cute. I've done one very short illustrated counting book for chlldren - 1 Mississippi (with elephants of course), and a young adult novel - Nose Dive.
ReplyDeleteAlso a couple of manuscripts for chapter books- it is definitely harder than it looks! k.
Fred
ReplyDeleteA delightful tale which children, young and old, would delight in...
Delightful Fred
ReplyDeleteI think writing for children is not only fun but it opens the mind to a world that children see naturally
Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteWhat a delightful walk. :) Love hearing you read it. I posted an older one of mine.
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excellent excellent excellent, fred! you wrote a fantastic childrens story! love it
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