You
found me in this state
A
condition deplorable
And
yet you held my hand
and talked
me down
I
clutched my heart
And
in you
I
found
Reason
For
Detour…
I
found you in that state askew
A
position unenviable
With tears ragged and obtuse
Upon
violet pegs you share yourself
every incensed shards of truth
not
knowing which path to walk toward
or how quickly pain absorbs, the delicate insides
the
repressing pangs of time,
unaware
of what comes next,
was
impossible to guess
But as it turned out
All you needed was someone to care for
Somebody to love you to the
core
A
person, someone
Who only needed you,
and exactly all of
What
you had to offer
And I
So
willingly found you
In mirrored fractures
In
mirrored fractures of disheveled decree
But
together,
in each other,
each reflection makes the other
as is intended to see
as is intended to see
as
is intended to be
Head on over to D'verse and enjoy some of the best poetry anywhere. Will be doing the same myself after a quick nap, but in bed, on the Ipad, so hopefully it won't be too difficult to comment or what not. OLN is by now three hours old and I can hear the pub rocking from here. So head on over…
I clutched my heart
ReplyDeleteAnd in you
I found
Reason
For
Detour…
What an amazing piece Fred--loved this!
its pretty cool how in the right moment the right people find each other...and are just what each other need...nice love poem fred...
ReplyDeleteSometimes being exact opposites is the thing that makes love work, each adds to the other and roles are inter-changeable, so when one is strong the other can be weak and vice versa.
ReplyDeleteTender, loving, and very touching Fred.
A moving piece...definitely felt it. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteAround and round we go, never know what we find when we look, sometimes have to cross out of the pit were in to find it though, the repetition at the end was great too, really added that extra little bit to it.
ReplyDelete"And I
ReplyDeleteSo willingly found you
In mirrored fractures
In mirrored fractures of disheveled decree"
Oh this is so profound. Lovely
We all need someone to love... the ending is amazing, Fred.
ReplyDeleteI love it when you sing for us.
ReplyDeleteLove this, Fred .
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