Sleeping
in a pine box
thinking
about the other day
sleeping
in a pine box
dreaming
that this time
it’ll
all turn out some other way
It’s
sad how fast we deteriorate
breaking
free, rotting unto the lost domains
unprepared
for what will be claimed
we
grow resigned in the mannerisms of loneliness and loss
where
stagnating shards fragment and shape our future plots
Sleeping
in a pine box
thinking
about the others
sleeping
in a pine box
all
the father’s, daughters, sons and mothers
It’s
amazing how things often come down
to
the number of correct decisions we make,
the
one’s we never would have made
if
not for one mistake, often an accidental turn
we,
at the time, deemed to be entirely incorrect
And
we never would have had the opportunities
to
live and to love, to bleed and to sweat
all
those intangible emotions that
would
not be available now, or
would
not be available in the innumerable futures yet to come
But
the erroneous turn we did commit
and
the flaw will forever be remembered
when
necessary, for sensorial exhumation
Sleeping
in a pine box
thinking
about the other day
sleeping
in a pine box
eyes
closed yet open, wide as they’ve ever stayed
And
in these containers
we
hold our cherished mistakes
as
one would keepsake any artifact
that
holds close the unmeasured meanings
ever
available for conjuring crucial memories lost but never forgotten…in a pine box
What a haunting poem. Well done!
ReplyDeleteYeah everything remains when the pine box comes and life is what we left behind. Although for me I'll be burnt and used as kitty litter, no pine box what so ever, I may end up in a pringle can though, that just be a cardboard box hahaha great lyrical job to the verse too.
ReplyDeletei agree that life in many ways comes down to the small decisions we make...we dont think like that in the moment but often find they catch up with us...and interesting texture with the sleeping in the pine box...rather haunting actually...
ReplyDeleteThis is incredible, you've been hitting them out of the park lately. I've been thinking about you, are you feeling any better? I missed you at OLN, hope you are well :).
ReplyDeleteThanks Anna.
DeleteHad a couple of rough weeks. Same old, same old reasons. Just trying to fight through it. Really appreciate the concern. Hopefully I'll get back into the groove sooner then later. Thanks again
hey man had not seen you drop something new or come by in a couple days...thought i would pop in and check on you...
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian,
DeleteYeah, I've been having a whole bunch of issues my way, fighting through some stuff, trying to get sleep schedule back in place, it's either been no sleep or 18 hours a day, not really a stranger to the longer sleeping but the being wide awake while your mind knows it's only slept 4 hours all week, that's kinda weird. But yeah, unfortunately making it to the computer's been a task. Luckily I did get some writing done though, just a matter of finding the time to transfer it from notepad to computer now. Appreciate the concern, hopefully I'll things squared up, as I've missed posting and checking the poetry sites out. Thanks again