Monday, July 9, 2012

Blue


Blue
Primary
Sea, ocean
Deep

Aqua, Marine
Lakes and streams,
And
So the sadness flows

Midnight, Navy
The intensity of hue
Increases the strength of mood
The intensity of hue
Midnight, Navy-blue

And so the sadness flows,
Through lakes and streams it goes
Aqua, marine

Deepest depths of Sea
Deepest ocean scene
Primary
Blue  

5 comments:

  1. Blue makes me red and red makes me orange and orange makes me yellow and that I just had to bellow haha nice weave of blue you made come due.

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  2. nice...cool mirror poem...i like your hinge in the middle...blue is def a color of many emotions...

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  3. Very cool show of progression of emotions illustrated by color. It goes darker and then it goes back to the primary "Blue". Like this a lot.

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  4. Nice. I really like the mood.

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  5. This is such a strong write. You wander around and through depression in the most creative of ways.

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