Showing posts with label reaction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label reaction. Show all posts

Friday, August 30, 2013

Shoulder Of The Road


I’m at the shoulder of the road,
Meters past the vibratory bumps,
Inching towards,
Where the wheels and lamps align,
Sidled up, parallel as can be,
Beside the painted lines,
Under the lamps that hang,
And here,
Where gravel and grass unite
I watch the flash of life speed by

The eyes focus as long as they may,
Until either the darkness overtakes the
Landscape, or another pirates my line of sight

Saturday, August 17, 2013

As Night Settles Into Darkness Once More


Five one-hundredth
Shrack, sh……….rack!
A white flash covets the evenings ebon gown
One one-hundredth, Two one-hundredth, Three one-hundredth
SCKERASH>…BOOM!

The stainless steel counters mirror the eyes of a 15-year-old kid—ignorant yet to the way of the world—just happy to have a job—to be up late at night, working, while his classmates are either sound asleep, or just finishing their nightly cram sessions—all in the name of honor roll eligibility…to please?

SKKRack…Skkracch…Skkrach…Blam!

Soap pail in tow, sudsy rag applied to drab yellow walls, eliminating the spackled V-shaped pattern away from view

A cold stutter bellows from within
Flash. Flash. Flash. Flash
All quiet! And the silence persists… …Leaves one wondering
Should the aftermath be explored now or in the morning?

Monday, February 11, 2013

The Letting Go





Softening the blow, letting go—
An entrapment’s set, a trigger’s tripped,
Beguiling solemnity, into a boxed chest of wood

Made of oak, notched and cured—
A tiny key violates a lock of bronze,
Concealing a past betrayed by love

Possessed by lost emotions, a vacant heart persists—
The forecast predicts a surging storm beneath,
Unearthing the many passions deadened by grief

Tethering tomorrow, with the fibrous tithing’s of today—
A venous strain, an ascription stirred within,
Initializing myriad dimensions, then staining them in blood

Vultures circle the hypocritical norm—
A broken voice cracks and screams,
Illuminating the sounds of a shadow fevering the skin

Softening the blow, letting go—
Things happen and then they don’t

Well, I seem to be a day off with my responses this week.  This is two consecutive D'Verse evenings that I've missed out on the link-up, but each time an excellent theme was provided, and therefore, I just had to respond regardless.  For this week's Poetics theme, Claudia presented us with the notion of Letting Go.  

I've always been intrigued by the open-ended possibility with this idea.  One can interpret the theme as a release, where tension is broken and this then opens up new and often undiscovered pathways.  Another possibility is looking at the theme in the manner of eliminating constraints and going with the flow, giving oneself up to the spontaneity that this new movement takes us. Yet another is the old idea of letting something go, giving it your blessing to leave.  Here there is a notion of freedom, yet also the portrayal of giving up control.  I think this also fits the popular saying about love, "set something free if you love it."  

Then, along the same lines of giving up control, one could look at this notion of letting go as being something akin to giving up. Perhaps you no longer have the will to fight whatever is oppressing you, whatever it is that is ladening such a burden upon your shoulders.  So here, you just give up, letting go, and allowing what will be, to be.

In any case, Claudia provided an excellent article on the subject and opened up the discussion to the poets of D'Verse, who, to no surprise, offered excellent insight through each poem shared.  I urge you to check out the post, read many, if not all, of the poems shared there, and perhaps, you, like myself, will find the inspiration to compose a response regardless of missing out on linking up to the Poetics discussion itself.  Cheers.