Showing posts with label visual. Show all posts
Showing posts with label visual. Show all posts

Thursday, February 23, 2012

Of Porcelain and Snow


of bark,
a daggered dress
remains
teacup stains of pearl,

of shard,
a charcoal tint
blessing
marbled stones in gaze

of flame,
a wick—blustered
root—wrenched
tress—stamped to palm 

of clay  
a ruffled wing
plucking
sky-dress tattered pink

of puddle—
rubbered soles
skitter
citrine rippling wake


 Over at D'Verse they're hosting their FormForAll and this week the prompt deals with the connection between classical Chinese and Japanese poetry.  Blue Flute guest posted a tremendous write-up and asked us to compose a piece using tangible imagery.  I did my best here, and not entirely sure how this piece came to be, as  I started writing about fluffy yellow rabbits, easter-eggs and green straw and then somehow this disturbing piece of the uncaring/unseeing eyes of society, ignorant to those desperately in need of help.  Quite frankly, not sure if I should be concerned or not.   

Also, side-note here, I think I fixed the word-verification thing that I guess somehow appeared at my site.  So, if someone could just drop a yes or no in with their comment, if, in-fact, it has been pulled.  Thanks