Showing posts with label Concrete. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Concrete. Show all posts

Sunday, September 9, 2012

Fall

Please head on over to D'Verse.  Mary is hosting her first Poetics and really did an outstanding job.  I read the article earlier today on my phone, and it is an excellent read, packed with history, opinion, possibility and some examples used in poetry. Again, I urge everyone to stop on by, read the article and then hop on over to the linky and get your fill of what should be another outstanding example of the poets from D'Verse bringing it as we're so accustomed to.  

She's asking us to write about Autumn, and presents a myriad of ways to go about it.  The funny thing is, which I'm actually scratching my head over.  I swear I wrote a poem a while back about fall.  In fact I see the title, Autumnal, but for whatever reason, it's not in my postings on any of my poetry sites, nor is it in my poetry files on-line or off line. It's just weird, perhaps it's something I had intended to write, but never got around to--just found it interesting and thought to share, as I'm guessing perhaps others have experienced something similar.

Anyhow, so for tonight's piece, I had thought about utilizing the colors of fall and basing a piece upon the colors and their symbolism, but, instead I went a different direction.  I decided to go a bit more metaphoric here today, even adding in a concrete image along the way. Cheers.

 


Autumn was a girl.

Today, she’s most definitely a woman.

I’d see her, standing there, from time to time,
Yet, never a single word departed lips.

None were needed.  The Exchange was simple.
She was there.  I was near.  Yes, it all was rather surreal.
But comfortable, comfortable as anything I’d ever known.

Her eyes communicated all there was to see, as succinctly as the tightest definition found in the oldest and most formidable of tomes, where meaning grew about, organically changing shape, each moment as her colors fleshed about, allowing the green in her to fully
mature and
matriculate.
She thrived in mid-July. Only to disappear
                           Each and every year

                                        Fall.  

Monday, October 24, 2011

Moonlight Slipper


Grappling the midnight oil
Bathing in its kerosene
 Alit, we light
As circumference smiles

Grasping
The moonlight,
                  with spoons
                           that writhe for
                                    submersion.
                                             Utensil deep,
                                                      The drowning ladle dies,
                                                               Suffocating in ecstasy,            
                                                                Each fatal moment,
                                                                Every tragic second,
                                                                Perfect slips from its
                                                                     Shimmering ridge.               
                                                                                          As     It                                                                                                 Seeps
                                                                                 Away from
                                                                                          The lip.
A moonlight slipper
Consumed with dew
Dreams of cosmic pools
To swim beneath,
To drift upon
Anima, persona
Unity, bathed in quenching light