Showing posts with label poetry to prose. Show all posts
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Thursday, November 10, 2011

D'Verse Prose to Poem- Prose Edda Chapter XVI


Original passage from The Prose Edda, by Snorri Sturluson. “The Fooling of Gylfe, Chapter XVI Ragnarok,
Then happens what will seem a great miracle, that the wolf devours the sun, and this will seem a great loss.  The other wolf will devour the moon, and this too will cause great mischief.  The stars shall be Hurled from heaven.  Then it shall come to pass that the earth and the mountains will shake so violently that tree will be torn up by the roots, the mountains will topple down, and all bonds and fetters will be broken and snapped.  The Fenris-wolg gets loose.  The sea rushes over the earth, for the Midgard-serpent writhes in giant rage and seeks to gain the land.  The ship that is called Naglfar also becomes loose.  It is made of the nails of dead men; wherefore it is worth warning that, when a man dies with unpared nails, he supplies a large amount of materials for the building of this shop, which both gods and men wish may be finished as late as possible. But in this flood Naglfar gets afloat. The giant Hrym is its steersman.  The Fenris-Wolf advances with wide open mouth; the upper jaw reaches to heaven and the lower jaw is on the earth.  He would open it still wider had he room.  Fire flashes from his eyes and nostrils.  The Midgard-serpent vomits forth venom, defiling all the air and the sea; he is very terrible, and places himself by the side of the wolf.


 Turned to poetic form, keeping original text and punctuation.
Then happens what will seem a great miracle,
that the wolf devours the sun,
and this will seem a great loss. 
The other wolf will devour the moon,
and this too will cause great mischief. 
The stars shall be Hurled from heaven. 
Then it shall come to pass
that the earth and the mountains will shake
so violently that tree will be torn up by the roots,
the mountains will topple down,
and all bonds and fetters will be broken and snapped. 

The Fenris-wolf gets loose.

The sea rushes over the earth,
for the Midgard-serpent writhes
in giant rage and seeks to gain the land. 

The ship that is called Naglfar also becomes loose. 
It is made of the nails of dead men;
wherefore it is worth warning that,
when a man dies with unpared nails,
he supplies a large amount of materials
for the building of this ship,
which both gods and men
wish may be finished
as late as possible.

But in this flood Naglfar gets afloat.
The giant Hrym is its steersman. 

The Fenris-Wolf advances with wide open mouth;
the upper jaw reaches to heaven
and the lower jaw is on the earth. 
He would open it still wider had he room. 

Fire flashes from his eyes and nostrils. 

The Midgard-serpent vomits forth venom,
defiling all the air and the sea;
he is very terrible,
 and places himself
 by the side of the wolf.


 My Poetic Interpretation of the Passage
At the end of days,
Mercy shall pour,

As the snarling fangs devour light
All dreams destroyed in darkest night

Stars collide.
Fall.  Dead.
Empty. Void.

And so the storm shall feel
As if long past.

Survivors, all whom remain,
Will kiss the ground in thanks,

But lips shall first feel
The bubbling cracks below
The violent tremors break
Unleashing beast below

Prompting a universal flood

Drowning
Souls saved
Briefly by
Boatman’s ride

Yet beast grows
Constricts the orb
Spitting out what
It cannot hide
In belly
Craving

Pathways blocked
And extraction
Of the soul commences
By serpent tongue
Siding with the
Frenzied beast
Reborn
From beneath
The dead.

D'Verse is open and serving up a dose of prose to poem this week for Meeting the Bar.  I thought it an interesting challenge, but I didn't know where to begin.  So I grabbed the first book near me, but that was a topology book, and figured nobody really wanted to hear me write on that:)  So I turned my head and saw my books on myth, but none seemed to urge my getting up from the computer chair.  So I delved into Ibooks and found that version of The Prose Edda staring at me.  It took a couple minutes to find a passage not smothered in hard-to-pronounce names, but I found one, and it just so happened to be about Armageddon, or as they call it Ragnarok. I may have alluded to a bit of information not presented in this passage, but not that much, if at all.  Just a piece of that chapter, perhaps longer than intended, but I found this exercise fun, and didn't want to leave the piece hanging mid passage.  It was different for sure, but different is good.