tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post8870052119304696734..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: A DevotionalAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-3671709063711918662012-10-27T01:58:24.456-04:002012-10-27T01:58:24.456-04:00This is the first self-referential villanelle I...This is the first self-referential villanelle I've encountered, and it balances this existentialism with an expressionism that at times can be intense. Well-wrought.<br /><br />And thanks so much for your comments on the article. When you love a subject as much as I do, the words flow easily.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-18060448543084228292012-10-26T13:31:15.815-04:002012-10-26T13:31:15.815-04:00A good pic for the share, Fred. Enjoyed the refrai...A good pic for the share, Fred. Enjoyed the refrain lines much, and messaging is clear and strong.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-3894771934941346562012-10-26T12:59:40.347-04:002012-10-26T12:59:40.347-04:00I am super impressed that you managed to encapsula...I am super impressed that you managed to encapsulate loss, which the form embraces, and then magically transform it to hope and forward motion, which the form resists. I am thinking it is the combination of the abstract/neutral 'five tercets and a quatrain' that allows you the freedom but one way or another it is quite the feat!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-70903582318732064552012-10-26T09:25:00.113-04:002012-10-26T09:25:00.113-04:00a clear meditation on the process of writing this ...a clear meditation on the process of writing this formJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-15194658524032422302012-10-26T08:29:24.721-04:002012-10-26T08:29:24.721-04:00A man, blistering in pain,
Seeking answers for all...A man, blistering in pain,<br />Seeking answers for all he’s lost....there's deep emotions in this, woven into five Tercets and a quatrain...sometimes i find it even easier to express emotions in a strict form than in free verse, maybe the form gives sth. like a safe frame.not quite sure...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-33824472554652978912012-10-26T07:54:57.069-04:002012-10-26T07:54:57.069-04:00"All sins washed purity regained" - tho..."All sins washed purity regained" - those words wash through this poem and give the answers sought. <br /><br />Love "Five Tercets and a quatrain." Quite a struggle to accomplish...but you achieved well indeed.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-63732534236824276522012-10-26T06:46:45.767-04:002012-10-26T06:46:45.767-04:00And 'thank you' for sharing!And 'thank you' for sharing!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-14694093091986384572012-10-26T06:24:21.506-04:002012-10-26T06:24:21.506-04:00ha...i like the inclusion of the form within the v...ha...i like the inclusion of the form within the verse, the five tercets and...as for me writing is often a part of that road to absolution of what ever i am going through...and in the unsuspecting hours...lol...whenever the muse strikes...well played sir...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com