tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post848258499175642861..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: 5 Haiku'sAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-66810578448257303352011-09-20T11:37:16.434-04:002011-09-20T11:37:16.434-04:00Mama, I'm thrilled to hear you like these 5, a...Mama, I'm thrilled to hear you like these 5, as I mentioned in a comment at your site, your wonderfully constructed Haikus inspired me to give a little bit more time to them, and instead of using solely in tweets, to post a few more on my site. Hopefully I'll filter some in on regular intervals going forward as they are fun to write, fun to read, and can really diversify what I do here. Anyhow, thanks again and glad you could stop by and comment, really appreciate it, thanks:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-14865570926941632162011-09-19T21:28:39.541-04:002011-09-19T21:28:39.541-04:00These are all excellent, but I particularly like t...These are all excellent, but I particularly like the fourth one. Wow!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-85967738839941146102011-09-19T19:41:45.059-04:002011-09-19T19:41:45.059-04:00Pat, Yeah I wish I could claim a method to these, ...Pat, Yeah I wish I could claim a method to these, but they were 5 separate Haikus that I just combined into one post- but I did write them all at one sitting so perhaps there was the subconscious connection going on- but glad you connected them- that's awesome to hear- Personally my favorite is probably the first though. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks again<br /><br />Thank you Claudia glad to have you over and really glad you enjoyed them<br /><br />Brian- guess you thought they were connected too, hmm..maybe there is some subconscious hoodoo voodoo going on here that I didn't even realize, maybe Pat's correct. I'll have to take a better look at each and look deeper for a connection. Yeah that last one is a bit foreboding isn't it, again, I think the first one is my favorite as it seems to paint a solitary observation together- anyhow, glad you enjoyed the Haiku's and thanks again for the feedback and visits, I really appreciate them allAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-9586555325020599692011-09-19T18:53:42.278-04:002011-09-19T18:53:42.278-04:00so a blueeyed red hear walks in...seemingly out of...so a blueeyed red hear walks in...seemingly out of reach...which of course frustrates anyone...but then it turns and love is spawned, but is it safe...ok so i completely butched this in the interpretation...i like the forebodingin the last...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-1126832609449540212011-09-19T16:06:08.342-04:002011-09-19T16:06:08.342-04:00each of them is very special fred and in each one ...each of them is very special fred and in each one is something unexpected...this is what i like in your writingClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-48461792093882937962011-09-19T15:12:10.872-04:002011-09-19T15:12:10.872-04:00Gave us five, heaven's alive, what am I do to,...Gave us five, heaven's alive, what am I do to, with more than one haiku..haha. Liked the third the best and also enjoyed the rest. Maybe I am looking into it more than should be, but it seems to me that each one sort of relates to the next one and by the time it's done. Kind of a little story has been told of sorts or maybe I just got hit on the head one too many times on the basketball courts..hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com