tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post8412349144818214277..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: Bottoming OutAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-67268828642081585132012-07-08T03:29:55.550-04:002012-07-08T03:29:55.550-04:00Wow! This is really good!Wow! This is really good!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-62782576918777659512012-07-04T16:23:44.539-04:002012-07-04T16:23:44.539-04:00Sorry comment eaten.
Something has gone wrong at...Sorry comment eaten. <br /><br />Something has gone wrong at tea time- this reminds me of Auden's "As I walked out one evening" - "the crack in the teacup opened a lane to the land of the dead." Very intense, and difficult landscape--which can also be fairly quotidian. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-71607972711154965752012-07-04T05:26:30.719-04:002012-07-04T05:26:30.719-04:00It's cool how you illustrate the emotion or mo...It's cool how you illustrate the emotion or mood using the imagery that you did. Slap of fear and backhand blows, to me are very unpleasant things be hit with. The second bit is a dire landscape. I think suddenly being aware of being directionless can be felt in that kind of shock.<br /><br />BTW, like that you have category links on the top of your page now. I wasn't aware some poems were part of a series before you have these.Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-3315432517452692042012-07-04T03:38:41.231-04:002012-07-04T03:38:41.231-04:00"In this land of crags,
the crevice snaps in ..."In this land of crags,<br />the crevice snaps in tines<br />and prongs, scattering the<br />self and all it's wounds from<br />it's precipice"<br /><br />The heart of the piece... "in this land of crags" Love this. Amazed at the poem you've achieved from the given words.pam princehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00112697316881380181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-58317320954720812272012-07-03T22:06:19.243-04:002012-07-03T22:06:19.243-04:00This is beautifully layered! Now, I've got to...This is beautifully layered! Now, I've got to check out the list.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-4494322389573834152012-07-03T21:14:34.363-04:002012-07-03T21:14:34.363-04:00The flow to your verse sure had some pace and snap...The flow to your verse sure had some pace and snap, just needed a pop and you could get your very own commercial hahaha that just came out, as my fingers spun about.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-44461894022491395422012-07-03T19:37:54.566-04:002012-07-03T19:37:54.566-04:00What an unpleasant feeling this must be. :)
This ...What an unpleasant feeling this must be. :)<br /><br />This is my favorite section:<br /><br />"when the<br />samovar explodes<br />In this land of crags,<br />the crevice snaps in tines<br />and prongs, scattering the<br />self and all its wounds"rosemary minthttp://rosemarymint.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com