tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post7865732881900372623..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: Caste ContrastAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-37929843235673600872011-12-08T18:03:08.483-05:002011-12-08T18:03:08.483-05:00This took a second reading for me to start to hear...This took a second reading for me to start to hear it. Not sure it gets to where you want it to go, but it does promise an interesting and perhaps exciting ending.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-13481581959650464232011-12-07T11:46:55.719-05:002011-12-07T11:46:55.719-05:00This is really something, Fred. Too many excellen...This is really something, Fred. Too many excellent lines to quote. Love the teeth on this one.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-89705101326294955182011-12-07T11:31:45.512-05:002011-12-07T11:31:45.512-05:00Sacred indeed Fred.
Hey man always great to read ...Sacred indeed Fred.<br /><br />Hey man always great to read you explorations and investigations into the realms of space and time (this suspension - as you - being the only way to defeat the evil machine) intellectual inserection and reclamation of self... its here because you make it so. Solid and interstingly scaped. Im pleased ive squeezed in some out of hours sculking. cheers fred.Arron Shillinghttp://tomeliot.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-23555723932876285772011-12-07T10:52:18.842-05:002011-12-07T10:52:18.842-05:00Oh! I am the first...
a starked realism...replete...Oh! I am the first...<br />a starked realism...replete with mythic allusions<br />all are separate but the same (kin)<br />within an Apollonian superstructure & a Dionysian infrastructure.<br /><br />great rhyme & Form here.<br />Enjoyed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-74425406889090516492011-12-07T09:28:26.278-05:002011-12-07T09:28:26.278-05:00Wow, Fred. This very well may be my favorite piece...Wow, Fred. This very well may be my favorite piece from you yet. This has wicked flow, and and I love how you switched up the structure in the middle. Very intriguing and thought provoking. There is so much to like here, but perhaps my favorite line is "The karmic flesh Of disillusioned kin".Uneven Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14081631496158407509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-90354541328431627592011-12-07T05:27:48.778-05:002011-12-07T05:27:48.778-05:00I was just reading a piece of news about a boy in ...I was just reading a piece of news about a boy in India who was beaten to death because he shared the same name of someone who was of a higher caste. <br /><br />"Born unto a surname<br />Inflicted with its toil<br />An inheritance of talents—<br /> You pray never to need"<br /><br />That would make life a worse torture on top of how it already is. It is a horror.Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-21013043567821800152011-12-07T01:20:23.701-05:002011-12-07T01:20:23.701-05:00..Those men and children sleeping
Shivering in the.....Those men and children sleeping<br />Shivering in their makeshifts... think that's the line that touched me most.. in a way we all do, don't we..and the show must go on..so we put on our blue stockings and dance the show until we break..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-72803894513706516912011-12-06T23:21:44.557-05:002011-12-06T23:21:44.557-05:00Oh, this has so many lovely lines and images.
Lo...Oh, this has so many lovely lines and images. <br /><br />Love this part:<br /><br />In the barns and cathedrals,<br />In the fields unsowed<br />In the trees above horizon lines<br />In the alleys and sewers beneath<br />Born unto a surname<br />Inflicted with its toil<br />An inheritance of talents—<br /> You pray never to need<br /><br />Centuries ripple blistered deep<br />Freshly painted eyes still see<br />The same ills at folly,<br />Yet play…has grown a conscious too<br /><br />(And the spittle too.) <br /><br />K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-52091853426067681812011-12-06T22:04:51.686-05:002011-12-06T22:04:51.686-05:00Truly interesting look at the working class in man...Truly interesting look at the working class in many forms. Sometimes the job really does portray the man or woman. Spittle made me laugh, just from the word. Such a scene though it absurd. But that the rich tend to do, looking down on me and you, with many out of work, they still are nothing but a jerk. A sacred day you say, pfffft don't get an ego dVerse, he's only kidding about your way..hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-15867267993765956262011-12-06T19:58:42.881-05:002011-12-06T19:58:42.881-05:00the gap between the two is ever widening as eviden...the gap between the two is ever widening as evidenced with the small groups that are now making headaches for the ruling class here in the US...of course they control the police force so it wont last long...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-14508842101609345892011-12-06T19:45:25.385-05:002011-12-06T19:45:25.385-05:00This is an interesting one, Fred. I like the way i...This is an interesting one, Fred. I like the way it rambles about, well echoed in the physical structure, and the layers of colors and descriptions all seem to lead the brain a step further(or in my case, a step astray, probably ;_) ) I'm absolutely hung up in a god way on the calabash--the water container? that wherewithal--wealth? corrodes...but the preceding sentences from Argots to seedlings and the soiled bed--just aced it. The social picture and the pure images flow together. Enjoyed it very much.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com