tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post7096929014000633700..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: As Crescent Waves MisbehaveAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-62182583376154589772012-11-17T16:28:03.239-05:002012-11-17T16:28:03.239-05:00the world still look flat to me.... the final cou...the world still look flat to me.... the final couplet has it... can't see the mermaid for the trout. Very niceLuke Praterhttp://www.lukeprater.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-21331385639434877532012-11-14T16:03:19.955-05:002012-11-14T16:03:19.955-05:00feels like a deep play between perceptions limited...feels like a deep play between perceptions limited, and perceptions possible<br /><br />esp liked,<br /><br />"Searching, seeking, from whence the<br />World was flat" -<br /><br />and still seeing trout when a mermaids in plain site, interesting, very thoughtful piece fred, thanks so much, best wishesadanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00710750989853277203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-28402937736084715852012-11-12T09:27:59.111-05:002012-11-12T09:27:59.111-05:00Very nice flow as the rhymes were given a go and n...Very nice flow as the rhymes were given a go and nice mix of fact and fiction too. The world isn't flat? Who knew? hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-87811965543910613782012-11-12T06:40:41.755-05:002012-11-12T06:40:41.755-05:00ha so interesting textures in this fred...and imag...ha so interesting textures in this fred...and imagery...the second stanza can def relate to...and the perceptions in that last stanza as well...interesting piece....hope your week starts wellBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com