tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post6880779554719305122..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: EnchantressAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-78212696522023860212011-07-08T13:03:03.199-04:002011-07-08T13:03:03.199-04:00norma, really glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks...norma, really glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for stopping by, Always fun to see the names of the visitors. Really appreciate your comments thanks:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-50631983204506910462011-07-08T10:55:10.085-04:002011-07-08T10:55:10.085-04:00You've used some great language and descriptio...You've used some great language and descriptions. My favourite lines "Into the forest With door ajar" and "wafer upon the tongue". I love the last three lines. Well written. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-64789314532262873242011-07-07T14:44:00.717-04:002011-07-07T14:44:00.717-04:00Pat, thanks for the visit. Yeah people should be ...Pat, thanks for the visit. Yeah people should be able to like themselves. However, some are born into terrible circumstances and when a child is experiencing neglect, pain and uneasiness through their childhood, unfortunately a lot of the time they turn out just like their oppressors. Glad you enjoyed the piece, thanks again:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-16320248340610322242011-07-07T14:42:00.533-04:002011-07-07T14:42:00.533-04:00Brian, thanks, glad you enjoyed it. The communion...Brian, thanks, glad you enjoyed it. The communion stanza is a bit back story and transition, thus very integral to the flow of the piece. Thanks again:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-57545951475134714792011-07-06T19:17:08.487-04:002011-07-06T19:17:08.487-04:00Another one nicely done. I love the line "waf...Another one nicely done. I love the line "wafer upon the tongue" Didn't even know what wafers were when I read it, but still just stuck out with me for some reason. <br /><br />Yeah one should be able to like themselves when looking in the mirror and not assimilate just for the sake of how others think you should live.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-27300353297150516192011-07-06T17:31:26.099-04:002011-07-06T17:31:26.099-04:00damn....i dont want to meet her in a dark alley......damn....i dont want to meet her in a dark alley...love the allusions in this...my fav stanza is the on that alludes to communion...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com