tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post6249137788110517717..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: Respirate/VentilateAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-69500763772052495172011-10-10T14:19:41.099-04:002011-10-10T14:19:41.099-04:00Thanks Pat, little bit of a lesson indeed, but yo...Thanks Pat, little bit of a lesson indeed, but you'll never here shut your trap from me, the rhyming replies are always fun for I<br /><br />Madelanie thanks I appreciate the feedback<br /><br />Shawna, thanks, glad you enjoyed the piece<br /><br />Mama,<br />Not strange. Actually the piece is a combination of things, one part is pretty much standard dictionary reference, obviously there's a metaphor in here as well, but I'm glad you found the humor in here as well, there are a few lines in their that I was hoping to lighten the mood of reading about science, and it deals with a common mistake that's made, from doctors on down. Anyhow, glad you liked the piece and found the humor in it. Thanks againAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-55054337101689381252011-10-10T12:11:08.804-04:002011-10-10T12:11:08.804-04:00I know I'm strange, but I found this absolutel...I know I'm strange, but I found this absolutely hilarious!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-66653611200432553122011-10-10T00:09:10.823-04:002011-10-10T00:09:10.823-04:00Love this, Fred:
"Learn to ventilate
Before ...Love this, Fred:<br /><br />"Learn to ventilate<br />Before air becomes a mystery"<br /><br />~Shawna (iamthat-shawna.blogspot.com)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-1829951680795740082011-10-09T22:06:13.158-04:002011-10-09T22:06:13.158-04:00A wonderfully educational verse.A wonderfully educational verse.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-2208528897049838672011-10-09T15:19:43.310-04:002011-10-09T15:19:43.310-04:00A science/medical lesson wrapped in a verse, wrapp...A science/medical lesson wrapped in a verse, wrapped in an enigma, wrapped in many other things, nice rap oh that was corny now I'll close my trap..hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com