tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post5834837017144931464..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: A Song for Immature SavantsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-79695901325443868682012-04-21T22:45:41.648-04:002012-04-21T22:45:41.648-04:00Raw and real. Love it.Raw and real. Love it.Zouxzouxhttp://zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-35635812726636926082012-04-20T16:20:30.311-04:002012-04-20T16:20:30.311-04:00Thanks Brian, the hero is vacant for the most part...Thanks Brian, the hero is vacant for the most part and kind of left in question, but the opportunity is there if you can believe in yourself. The chorus is the strong point of the song, I built that part first and filled the rest in after. Glad you enjoyed it. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-65494567494571695822012-04-20T16:19:17.604-04:002012-04-20T16:19:17.604-04:00Ha, yeah nothing you'd want to meet in a dark ...Ha, yeah nothing you'd want to meet in a dark alley, that is for sure. Yeah you know, you get those moments when only rhyming will do, well I think we all know you know that too. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-11096697226311494482012-04-20T16:18:18.316-04:002012-04-20T16:18:18.316-04:00Thanks Anna, I was looking for an intensity, glad ...Thanks Anna, I was looking for an intensity, glad you saw that. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-34285345088046404182012-04-20T16:17:46.142-04:002012-04-20T16:17:46.142-04:00Thanks Betsy, yeah you know, this whole piece was ...Thanks Betsy, yeah you know, this whole piece was a product of that line. I thought it up first and thought it belonged in the chorus of a song, so I built the chorus from there and then went on to write the rest. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-22478510903482750272012-04-20T16:16:28.871-04:002012-04-20T16:16:28.871-04:00Awesome, glad you said that. Almost all my songs ...Awesome, glad you said that. Almost all my songs are written with a metal slant to them. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-62633311602690212232012-04-20T16:15:50.727-04:002012-04-20T16:15:50.727-04:00Thanks Claudia, the learning what's inside us ...Thanks Claudia, the learning what's inside us is a big part of the song. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-20679168340080893152012-04-20T16:15:23.189-04:002012-04-20T16:15:23.189-04:00Yeah, not really a nice tune, overwhelming and str...Yeah, not really a nice tune, overwhelming and strong are kind of what I was going after, so thanks, I appreciate that.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-19288727512956878932012-04-20T15:10:54.519-04:002012-04-20T15:10:54.519-04:00that refrain works really well fred...and also the...that refrain works really well fred...and also the pointing at the learning from what is already in us..waiting to be discovered..there's much more inner strength than we're aware of at times i thinkClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-9411665218753338682012-04-20T13:26:20.415-04:002012-04-20T13:26:20.415-04:00Nice?
I disagree. There's nothing 'nice...Nice?<br />I disagree. There's nothing 'nice' about it.Strong, yes. Overwhelming, yes. Powerful, yes. Puzzling at times? yes.<br />Quite something.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-68812470343838648342012-04-20T09:33:25.475-04:002012-04-20T09:33:25.475-04:00This will make great metal lyrics. I don't re...This will make great metal lyrics. I don't really want more drama though but I think one sometimes act like one wants more drama - complaining much, wishing and not acting, just jeering from the edge.Ravenblackhttp://theotherdayplace.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-58428870616214856812012-04-20T09:02:09.893-04:002012-04-20T09:02:09.893-04:00you want a story open your eyes...wow I love that ...you want a story open your eyes...wow I love that line!<br />Great imagery, as always, too Fred.Betsy Brockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06807795605763246015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-40549148138976759812012-04-19T23:49:54.958-04:002012-04-19T23:49:54.958-04:00I agree with Pat, some frightening images here, de...I agree with Pat, some frightening images here, delivered with an intensity that builds with each stanza. Potent work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-74466197815314471432012-04-19T19:24:54.924-04:002012-04-19T19:24:54.924-04:00Nice rhyming at your sea, setting the pace with gl...Nice rhyming at your sea, setting the pace with glee. Yeah no matter how much one goes at it and nags, trying to get others to help them and such. Sometimes they just can't, no matter the creeper or situation it first has to start from within. Although tons of creepy things you thrown in there I would rather not meet up with in a dark alley..hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-90550324433110103372012-04-19T18:41:28.253-04:002012-04-19T18:41:28.253-04:00nice...i really like the refrain or chorus in this...nice...i really like the refrain or chorus in this...esp the part on finding a hero...and love the quick turns on the imagery as well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com