tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post4923322975177549178..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: On Bated Wings/ Et adhucAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-65147745796413479492012-02-09T10:53:54.860-05:002012-02-09T10:53:54.860-05:00A condemnation,
Not un-similar to
The last words ...A condemnation,<br />Not un-similar to<br /><br />The last words Italicized<br />By that of Umbrian tongue<br /><br />stunning words ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-1694714000191604562012-02-09T08:06:50.663-05:002012-02-09T08:06:50.663-05:00Unaccompanied tearstains/ bled to extinction.
Th...Unaccompanied tearstains/ bled to extinction. <br /><br />The mystery posed by combining the words, like a surreal conjunction of dissimilarities screaming for similitude, that is what poetry is about. Thruout you've challenged us to pull meaning from wordplay and difficult ruptures of meaning, bringing us to realize the power of language to make us make it make meaning.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-27091234699145835862012-02-08T13:07:53.589-05:002012-02-08T13:07:53.589-05:00Bat-ed wings, garlicky stressed, and bled to extin...Bat-ed wings, garlicky stressed, and bled to extinction..... I thought I had enterred Brahm Stoker's world for a moment.... but yes, certainly a joyous song in spite of it....!John Allen Richterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02529922180796109091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-81385313043306665072012-02-07T22:00:36.442-05:002012-02-07T22:00:36.442-05:00this is cool fred - your shorter writes have a lot...this is cool fred - your shorter writes have a lot of impact - ive got to admit 'unsimiliar' caught me out, so i've learnt something to lol - i'm always partial to a bit of latin too - all the best broArron Shillinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17989854352644796752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-14589423479139729442012-02-07T20:51:51.115-05:002012-02-07T20:51:51.115-05:00"By the spiny rose
Of latent ken"
Damn,..."By the spiny rose<br />Of latent ken"<br /><br />Damn, that is COOL!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-77266775546591967322012-02-07T19:12:42.557-05:002012-02-07T19:12:42.557-05:00I loved how you put this together and it hangs tog...I loved how you put this together and it hangs together well --Lovely piece!<br /><br />@AudreyHowittAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-3906414183239114962012-02-07T18:06:57.497-05:002012-02-07T18:06:57.497-05:00You sure have a way with words...I think beauty is...You sure have a way with words...I think beauty is indescribable. I appreciate the translated words ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-6865881318962185422012-02-07T18:03:42.513-05:002012-02-07T18:03:42.513-05:00So much to like here. Very unique word choices, an...So much to like here. Very unique word choices, and very expertly deployed.<br /><br />It's just real good. A most enjoyable read.Sky Raft Wandererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09178209634278049386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-15869840509121092722012-02-07T17:57:16.437-05:002012-02-07T17:57:16.437-05:00your lines carry a lot of grit and then in the end...your lines carry a lot of grit and then in the end you still find room for joy...and to me that is a beautiful thing fred...nice...and i like the use of latin too...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-63169338892978708132012-02-07T16:43:11.832-05:002012-02-07T16:43:11.832-05:00Nice, erudite twists of words and phrase here, Fre...Nice, erudite twists of words and phrase here, Fred. Latin tags ask the eternal questions--esp like 'cloven pungency' beneath the semi-colon.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-44689883842671837532012-02-07T16:37:15.877-05:002012-02-07T16:37:15.877-05:00Reminded me of vampires. I like garlic (in moderat...Reminded me of vampires. I like garlic (in moderation) lol like bats too, just don't want any trying to drink my blood.<br />Lovely piece.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-8892913669641053832012-02-07T15:58:20.629-05:002012-02-07T15:58:20.629-05:00love that you wove in some latin..and love that yo...love that you wove in some latin..and love that you gave us the translation as well...i've learned latin from the asterix and obelix comics..so it doesn't get me very far...smiles.... esp. liked..<br /><br />A condemnation,<br />Not un-similar to<br /><br />The last words Italicized<br />By that of Umbrian tongue...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-21457369183349949892012-02-07T15:13:27.923-05:002012-02-07T15:13:27.923-05:00No idea how this can be, but your word combination...No idea how this can be, but your word combination sure brought glee. Freckled toxicant could be a whole post in and of itself. Hmmm might be an idea for my shelf..haha The cat doesn't speak latin either. So good translation or the cat would be lost. A movie title in there somewhere.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com