tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post4914168221231603272..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: Shards of Mankind BrokenAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-51425025124948463772012-12-15T09:07:14.001-05:002012-12-15T09:07:14.001-05:00Had to look a few words up this time with your chi...Had to look a few words up this time with your chime, and yeah such senseless crap, with no reason to be given a lap, at least not a good one, under any sun. Liked the addendum addition too, adding that much more on cue.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-2590216430780240782012-12-15T08:56:30.517-05:002012-12-15T08:56:30.517-05:00Tragedies offer casualties alone. In such moments,...Tragedies offer casualties alone. In such moments, mankind as a unity is shattered. All we have is grief and mourning. And a river born from sorrow.<br /><br />How very true, Fred! Tragedies break the very fabric that bonds relationships. Sorrows tend to slowly show itself encompassing all manner of life's happenings.<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-25807995173984900412012-12-15T08:30:56.284-05:002012-12-15T08:30:56.284-05:00Like this one a lot - esp this part
Overwrought....Like this one a lot - esp this part <br /><br />Overwrought. Ambushed. Daylight is truncated. Evening falls to Stygian design<br /><br />'stygian' a favourite word... <br /><br />the river/water metaphor a strong force in this piece working well for you. Great read, painful tooLuke Praterhttp://www.lukeprater.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-27907480925727584692012-12-15T07:33:31.157-05:002012-12-15T07:33:31.157-05:00i really like your addendum fred....its like a pra...i really like your addendum fred....its like a prayer to me...a well wishing...there is def a river of sorrow flowing today...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com