tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post462100275193297583..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: A Broken FancyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-81939660927584050762012-04-09T19:36:31.189-04:002012-04-09T19:36:31.189-04:00b...b....b...b....ha...fun read man and def love s...b...b....b...b....ha...fun read man and def love some of the word play...esp the greedy conforming their speech...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-10712540996320518792012-04-09T09:04:19.359-04:002012-04-09T09:04:19.359-04:00I love the alliteration! Very cool.I love the alliteration! Very cool.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-47010852535123876932012-04-09T05:52:25.753-04:002012-04-09T05:52:25.753-04:00this is very cool fred...would make for a great sp...this is very cool fred...would make for a great spoken word piece and has a fantastic flow..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-80656223308677431552012-04-08T22:12:56.604-04:002012-04-08T22:12:56.604-04:00Great wordplay, my eyes played tricks and I had to...Great wordplay, my eyes played tricks and I had to reread and pause several times, very nice. Happy Easter!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-78360153870593036402012-04-08T21:53:05.144-04:002012-04-08T21:53:05.144-04:00Like the flow and admit the change up at the start...Like the flow and admit the change up at the start of the second stanza almost escaped me the first time, very tricky. The embodiment of greed is whack at any shack. Those people should turn over a new leaf and stop causing everyone else grief. But alas they are nothing but your very first B and that is all they seem to forever be.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com