tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post3973358452461233056..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: An Absentee Father of ImpetusAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-703184285750832972012-04-21T14:15:55.988-04:002012-04-21T14:15:55.988-04:00'Corroded versions of the self...' another...'Corroded versions of the self...' another challenging, rending, and excellent poem from you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-39058538684669954702012-04-21T12:50:22.290-04:002012-04-21T12:50:22.290-04:00Awesome write, Fred. Those closing lines are amaz...Awesome write, Fred. Those closing lines are amazing.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-2050434834486186012012-04-20T22:17:41.394-04:002012-04-20T22:17:41.394-04:00The torment of tantalus popped in as I read, episo...The torment of tantalus popped in as I read, episode title I can't remember from which show though at the moment, brain fart I guess..haha...but yeah we let ourselves get in the way even when we know we or it is wrong and keep on pushing through, usually doing more harm than good.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-18407220361020991702012-04-20T17:36:12.160-04:002012-04-20T17:36:12.160-04:00nice....really nice flow of though and rhythm in t...nice....really nice flow of though and rhythm in this...and some nice allusions too...the trampled rainbow of hope...lacking the stomach to abort is a nice yet somewhat gruesome turn of phrase as well...<br /><br />ps. i have watched V but that one came from the recent viewing of V for VendettaBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com