tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post2653255736650714109..comments2023-08-29T00:19:57.259-04:00Comments on Poetical Psyche: LayeredAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-62746450395989573452011-07-21T13:13:03.950-04:002011-07-21T13:13:03.950-04:00Thanks to everyone that commented on this poem, I ...Thanks to everyone that commented on this poem, I really appreciate that you all took the time to read the piece and give your feedback on my work. Glad you all enjoyed the piece, my pleasure to share it with you allAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-65254785307335028782011-07-21T07:39:01.676-04:002011-07-21T07:39:01.676-04:00I love the rhythm of this, it's a very cool pi...I love the rhythm of this, it's a very cool piece. Great rhymes and as always a vocabulary I would kill for lolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-87833290188189679012011-07-20T22:31:20.983-04:002011-07-20T22:31:20.983-04:00amazing thoughts...
Thanks for sharing.amazing thoughts...<br />Thanks for sharing.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-67644825997553605332011-07-20T20:55:55.327-04:002011-07-20T20:55:55.327-04:00I enjoyed the first stanza, the words under my ton...I enjoyed the first stanza, the words under my tongue were lovely, nice display :)<br />Enjoy the potluck!<br /><br />http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/07/poetry-potluck-week-44-painting.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-1321493963590717682011-07-20T17:52:54.711-04:002011-07-20T17:52:54.711-04:00wow very awesome!wow very awesome!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-930188128946500869.post-22978067961190499942011-07-20T14:36:41.257-04:002011-07-20T14:36:41.257-04:00Those last three lines were wonderful, especailly ...Those last three lines were wonderful, especailly "but the effort to try" As that is all one needs sometimes.<br /><br />Loved "looming lepers" too, for whole different reason as it reminded me of a Monk episode..hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com